its the roughly final version. Its the vinal version before anyone other than myself has read it. Next week in class the whole tutorial will be giving cointrusctive critsism so things may change.
I know there are narrator problems. This is a rough draft. The original had it all 3rd person narration. Still trying to catch it all for changing to first person.
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I know there are narrator problems. This is a rough draft. The original had it all 3rd person narration. Still trying to catch it all for changing to first person.
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