Being Missed

Apr 03, 2013 16:22

Title: Being Missed
Author:
daan73
Beta:
cindyls1969
Rating: nc 17
Word Count: approx 1225
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters.
Summary: He Really misses him
Author's Notes: Thanks to cindy for encouragment and beta You rock :)
written for the minibang 2013 Thanks to the shack for hosting.

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sarahsezlove April 3 2013, 16:58:48 UTC
Very sweet, Dani.
What a lovely name for a little girl.

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daan73 April 7 2013, 12:24:01 UTC
Thank you Sarah
I am glad you tought it was sweet :)
and yes lily rose it just popped out ;)

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nukefan1959 April 3 2013, 17:57:31 UTC
Well this one I've been waiting for and wasn't disappointed loved all the emotion in it and the way they love each other well done fabulous can't wait for more.

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daan73 April 7 2013, 12:25:33 UTC
awww Paul you are too sweet really I am glad you werent dissapointed :)
I am glad you felt the emotions and their love and for me their love will allways prevail not matter what <3

More Geezzz Paul give me a break will you there isnt supposed to be more !!!

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appassionata1 April 3 2013, 18:41:44 UTC
Wonderful story Dani. The anguish of missing each other terribly, then the total passion of them assuaging their longing for each other and ending with the happiness of being able to welcome their baby into the world. It leaves you with a very good feeling :D

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daan73 April 7 2013, 12:27:20 UTC
Thank you so much Faye i am so glad the feeling came trough :)
And the good feeling was what i was after with this one
Thanks for reading :) x

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123cariad April 3 2013, 20:22:43 UTC
Oh Dani ... love your story so much ... it gave so many emotions love, longing , want and the happiness such a perfect combination contained the feel good factor .. made me smile thank you !!!

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daan73 April 7 2013, 12:28:08 UTC
thank you so much Stella I am very pleased you felt all the different emotions :)
And the smile well that is what i was aiming for so thank you :) xx

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scj0710 April 3 2013, 21:03:09 UTC
Wonderful! Tender and very hot. Of course Luke and Noah would be great parents - and this reflects that so lovingly! Being Missed is a real treat!

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daan73 April 7 2013, 12:28:58 UTC
Thank you What a sweet compliment :blush:
I am glad you think of it like that :)

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