My favourite haiku

Jul 04, 2009 17:33

Bunz lives in a big
family. You don't have to
get it. She has love.

written a few years ago by superjill,

Leave a comment

Comments 3

mikepictor July 5 2009, 03:50:15 UTC
You can put family on line 1, and get it on line 2.

Haikus don't have to be 5-7-5. The principle characteristic is 17 syllables in 3 statements. 5-7-5 is just the most conventional form people know.

Reply

ambiviolent July 5 2009, 13:26:22 UTC
Perchance thusly?:

many spouses
multiple mummies, baby singing
all love wide and splendid

Reply

dabunz July 5 2009, 14:24:12 UTC
Ooooh! I like that one too!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up