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My favourite haiku
Jul 04, 2009 17:33
Bunz lives in a big
family. You don't have to
get it. She has love.
written a few years ago by
superjill
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mikepictor
July 5 2009, 03:50:15 UTC
You can put family on line 1, and get it on line 2.
Haikus don't have to be 5-7-5. The principle characteristic is 17 syllables in 3 statements. 5-7-5 is just the most conventional form people know.
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ambiviolent
July 5 2009, 13:26:22 UTC
Perchance thusly?:
many spouses
multiple mummies, baby singing
all love wide and splendid
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dabunz
July 5 2009, 14:24:12 UTC
Ooooh! I like that one too!
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Haikus don't have to be 5-7-5. The principle characteristic is 17 syllables in 3 statements. 5-7-5 is just the most conventional form people know.
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many spouses
multiple mummies, baby singing
all love wide and splendid
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