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[daegunkoh]

Okay, I think I know what's been wrong with my works. Not enough scenery. It's all been metaphors and puns. I need atmosphere! So, here are my options. I either re-write it and tweak it to make it all Ominpotent Singular point-of-view. It's that, or I re-write it as a script. Hmm, what to do, what to do...

Comments

[suddenillusions]

omnipotent singular pov.

script writing won't fit your style, it won't give you enough control over characters and movement.

[mrs_mugen]

People really suck. And I'm really mean. A very bad friend.

[daegunkoh]

What are you talkin' about? Gimme a call today or somethin'.