i like that you used peter pan, and no offense or anything, but you might get counted off since peter pan is someone else's idea. i would advise making it a little more universal and alluding to peter pan in one of the verses instead of making it completely about him. just a suggestion though, it's your sonnet and you can do whatever you want.
I like it. You may have a problem analyzing it...although I think you could do it on youth or whatever. I think its cute. but do remember "Later-you will be asked to identify tone, figures of speech, connotative language, tone shift and universal meaning in your own poem."
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but do remember "Later-you will be asked to identify tone, figures of speech, connotative language, tone shift and universal meaning in your own poem."
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