To 'you'

Jun 09, 2005 21:51

In Heaven ...

A stream gushing from a cloud, lone and blue
striking musical chords on rocks below, icy and white
birds lending their chirps to the stream's music divine ..
Have we ever heard a sweeter sound, my ears wonder
they remember they had .. your giggles.

Follow the stream's lead, i did ..
to the garden of the angels, she leads ..
stretched all ( Read more... )

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mona_mona June 10 2005, 02:02:23 UTC
*sigh*

u must've been in 'some kinda mood' to write this :-)

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daggereyes June 10 2005, 04:25:31 UTC
u bet i was, it's just that i have to find the 'you' yet :-)

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airr June 10 2005, 06:43:56 UTC
you told me that you found the 'you' yesterday :P
wasnt that 'you' this 'you'? or you want many more 'you's

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daggereyes June 10 2005, 06:50:39 UTC
maums, yaake sullu heli nan reputation haal maadtha idiya

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awesome kaundinya June 11 2005, 17:42:30 UTC
splendid creativity.

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Re: awesome daggereyes June 13 2005, 04:46:39 UTC
thanks maums .. btw u r the only male who cared to appreciate it, glad that there are some musical souls around :)

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Re: awesome sharva June 20 2005, 04:14:32 UTC
too much kishore!!..i never knew you could write such a wonderful snippet. I wonder how could that 'you' still ain't said 'yes';).

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