Haiku

[daigotsu]

I couldn't sleep last night, so I wrote a Haiku:

A single moment
caught between breath and heartbeat.
Captured in a blade.

What do you think, should I extend it into a renga or something?

Comments

Haiku

[gigolohitman]

No, I think it's too good to risk marring with further addition.

Perhaps I should have more confidence in your poetic mastery?