muted dialogue (2/2)

[dailuzo]

Title: muted dialogue
Pairing: youngjae/zelo
Rating: PG-13
Genre: slice of life
Length: ~14,000 words
Summary: they're in love but they aren't friends, and maybe that's the problem.

part one | part two

Comments

[his_angel16]

This was so cute! :D Junhong was worried over nothing! Lol. Then again, I wouldn't know how to go about something like that either. O.O Thanks for sharing~. <3

[dailuzo]

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment :)

[gqie]

DDDDD: I cannot. Too good

[dailuzo]

haha mate thanks for holding my hand through the whole journey and convincing me that what I wrote wasn't total crap! (^^) this fic really grew into a monster~ towards the end, i was just praying that it'll end soon for the sake of my assignment :p and long comments are always love, no worries~

i'll go work on your krisho now :p

[junfhongs]

oh my gosh ;;

i knew this would be great when i saw 14k younglo, which is probably the first younglo longfic i've read (and the first bap longfic i've read in ages). i just have to say that this is really really well-written, and i love how you portrayed their relationship. i can actually imagine them like this; physically close, but not exactly intimate?? that made no sense, but that's just my lack of coherency showing because your fic was that good.

kudos to you, author-nim!! <33

[dailuzo]

oh but it does make sense to me haha! and you're too kind! i don't deserve your praises T^T

thank you for reading :)

[littlefuji]

I sat down to read this nice long fic with a bowl of ramyeon and I gotta say, I enjoyed every word of it <3
They're so awkward and easy at the same time, it's kind of pretty?
Like... it doesn't have to be everyone's dream relationship but that's perfectly alright and they're still meant for each other.
Loved prissy Dae and the mentions DaeJae too, good stuff!

[dailuzo]

Aww, you phrased it really beautifully bb. Thank you :)

[lovebeat_down]

I really really loved your characterizations, Junhong and Youngjae are both awkward and could put their thoughts into words but because of that, they understand each other.
And Junhong not wanting to be a burden, and Youngjae wanting to be more helpful.
But most all, Youngjae being a comfort without even being told that Junhong needs help.
God I loved this so much

[dailuzo]

thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment :)