Dream of consciousness

[daisy_a_flower]

Building blocks
falling rocks
broken locks
darning socks

Written in dream
defeated by steam
consciousness stream
you're off the team

Pick a card
it isn't hard
a mirror marred
its just a shard

I'm the king
kiss my ring
one more thing
this will sting

Comments

[chris_warrior]

your poems always make me just a little sad and a lot pensive. hrm.

then again, they usually hit something in my current life that i'm just not exactly happy with my behavior in regards to. or some better English sentence that means the same thing, ;)

[amusinganomaly]

I really like the rhythm of this one

[myschief_demon]

i love it i want to see you perform it sometime!

[pennhothwen]

yes.... with interpretive contact juggling.