Mr. Brightside

May 17, 2013 17:58

Mr. Brightside
Suho/Kai, Suho/Kris
R
Warnings (highlight to see): character death
Angst/Romance

A/N: This was a prompt made at exopromtmeme. I hope I did it justice! Also I used this playlist to write the fic so maybe you might want to listen along to it as you read ( Read more... )

pairing: krisho, rating: r, pairing: sukai, group: exo, genre: romance, genre: angst

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dee_fml May 18 2013, 16:13:01 UTC
OMG! OP here. You just killed me. This is amazing. I have so much to say. Can I save a spot? I just need to contain my feels first.

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daisychains555 May 18 2013, 16:37:14 UTC
<33 of course you can save a spot, this entire fic is for you bb!

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dee_fml May 19 2013, 11:59:31 UTC
I'm back!

First of all, THANK YOU SO MUCH for filling my prompt. You did not only give it justice, you definitely wrote a masterpiece.

Tbh, I was just hoping for some angst with a bit of smut, but you gave me so much heart-wrenching angst and ngl, I re-read this about 3 times before writing this comment. That's how much I loved it. Reading it once was simply not enough. /sobs/

I love how you wrote Jongin and how his relationship with Suho developed. I absolutely teared up when Jongin said he'd take the fall for Suho. All throughout the fic, I felt Jongin's love for Suho. It felt like I'm burying myself with feelings and OMG the last part just nailed my coffin. I am dead, dead I tell you.

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daisychains555 May 19 2013, 23:48:31 UTC
I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT! Like really! I've never filled a prompt before so I was really nervous. Oh pish posh masterpiece *blushes* hardly.

Yeah, your prompt just made my mind turn to super angst. I saw the vid of the song (Mr. Brightside) again and I got the idea of this really sad/twisted type of relationship while I was watching it. You had a great prompt so I wanted to do it the best justice I could muster. Aww!! Really, hearing you like it is enough for me to be content forever and ever. <33

Sorry I killed you with feels. I'm a masochist when it comes to my otps. I love to put them in the saddest scenarios idk why. You can send me your love in cupcake, I definitely accept that form of payment ;P Yay! so glad you liked the playlist. I thought the Lana Del Rey song matched perfectly with Suho's pov, while the others are more in Jongin's pov. Anyway I'm glad you like it and you have my love also for making this prompt!!

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dearmykeysx May 19 2013, 08:15:38 UTC
oh my god i totally felt my heart clenching and twisting and hurting as i read this but i thought i'd be okay
BUT THEN I GOT TO THE END AND MY EYES STARTED WATERING AND NOW I'M WRITING THIS COMMENT WITH TEARS IN MY EYES
i just... like... /felt/ the angst and the pain and it was so painfully good because i just loved everything about it and kai is a saint /sighs
i'm gonna mem this in case i need to cry later lmao

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daisychains555 May 19 2013, 23:19:07 UTC
Ohh don't cry *passes you tissue*

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dearmykeysx May 20 2013, 04:12:55 UTC
sometimes I get a little too emotional when I read fics LOL. thank you for writing it! ^^

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indira22 May 20 2013, 04:30:33 UTC
ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *OH GOD THIS FIC!!!!*
GIVE ME SO MUCH FEEL!!!!
oh my dgfkhsgfkdhslgflsdkfhdslgfls *i cant express it...*

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xxhna June 30 2013, 13:38:14 UTC
This reality sucks for Jongin! He loves Suho more than the other does. This stuff happens all the time though ehh? Poor Jongin

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