wedding night (the one themed)

May 28, 2013 21:20


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teamzaylor May 29 2013, 01:55:33 UTC
that's really cute & romantic!
I love the way how you described Zac! :)

"Lay back and enjoy the show,” he said. ~ omg!!! sexy as hell!!!

"I had my own superman right here beside me in bed." ~ Love that line too!

"I realized that simply laying together was the most wonderful expression of our love." ~ romance at its best <3 <3

Really enjoyed reading this! :)

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tondada May 29 2013, 13:44:37 UTC
Awww . . . That was beautiful!

I like how you introduced the fact that she was in a wheelchair so slowly. Only little glimpses leading up to the touching ending.

You can really tell they love each other!!

Call me crazy (I know it doesn't really matter), but I would love to know Lindsey's back story. What happened that she ended up in the chair? Random thinking . . .

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eleflowerpot May 30 2013, 12:39:30 UTC
This was super cute. All the little touches you added showed their relationship perfectly.

The descriptions at the beginning about the wedding were fantastic. For me this is probably your best piece of writing :)

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daisynala87 May 30 2013, 14:18:00 UTC
thank you that means alot:)

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