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tondada August 6 2013, 14:55:53 UTC
Yay! I was so excited to see this story pop up today! I have been so waiting for this naughty nurse to make his appearance!! ;o)

I have to tell you that Lindsey is one lucky girl to have such a hot and pleasing husband, but he too is lucky to have such a loving and appreciative wife. I think he is very aware of that as well. These two are such a great couple!!

(I stopped to admire the view for a few moments, secretly pleased how much this man seemed to hate wearing clothes.) -- This might have been my favorite line in the whole story!! What a lovely visual image it creates.

I can't wait to read more about these two!

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malfunkshon August 6 2013, 18:21:46 UTC
So, Zac is wiggling his ass! And then he stripped! OMG! That's a show that nobody should ever miss. I didn't expect that, for sure!

Good work! Your writing is becoming more polished and the story is a very sweet little vignette that, even if short, really gives you a sense of the dynamic of these two characters, and of the real love between them.

And of course there's plenty of Zac's ass ;)

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eleflowerpot August 8 2013, 11:40:07 UTC
Aw, these two are just too cute! They're absolutely perfect together.

I was so embarrassed for Lindsay when she was recounting having to talk about her sex life in the restaurant. Mind you, when it's as hot as that with Zac you'd want to tell everyone! ;)

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daisynala87 August 8 2013, 12:48:48 UTC
Thank you sweetheart for the kind review:)

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zacgirl1 August 8 2013, 22:27:43 UTC
Awwww Linsey and Zac are perfect for each other, they are so sweet together :)

And Zac naughty nurse/stripper...way too hot ;)

I love this short story. It's so sweet and sexy and funny ❤❤❤❤

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daisynala87 August 8 2013, 22:55:24 UTC
thank you for the kind review:)

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