the one chapter 8

Feb 19, 2014 15:38

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malfunkshon February 21 2014, 02:01:03 UTC
The most striking thing about this chapter is that, although Stacy's cruelty is really heartbreaking, Lindsey is reacting - she's not taking it like a victim, and she decides that she doesn't want anything to do with her anymore. I hope she'll stick to her guns - because Lindsey is a strong character and it's interesting to see how she develops and becomes more confident. Like in the last paragraph... which I assumeis the beginning of some physical fun between her and Jason?

Anyway, good work!

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