A beginning of friendship Pt. 5/11

[daisyscrapper]

           Jennifer made her way back to her quarters in a daze. She half-heartedly waved at a few people who greeted her on the way but in her mind she was in a different world. What just happened? Or, what just ALMOST happened? Her heart was racing as she closed the door to her room and hurried to take a shower before jumping into her uniform for

Comments

[scifan1]

Heee heee. This story gets sweeter and sweeter the more I read. :D

Great job!

[lizbet0]

You did a great job capturing Rodney! I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!

(P.S. I used to be a proofreader as part of my first job out of college, so I kinda noticed a few things you might want to tweak. Email me at ladyadiah@yahoo.com if you'd like me to send them along.)