Comments | daisyscrapper: A beginning of friendship Pt. 9/?

daisyscrapper

A beginning of friendship Pt. 9/?

Feb 04, 2008 23:27

Two weeks went by and Ronon and Jennifer found little time together. Ronon went on several missions, one of which he came back after being tortured by the wraith for a day. Jennifer forced him to stay for two full days to recover. He had multiple wounds from the incident. The wraith had mostly knocked him around a lot, so fear of a ( Read more... )

sga, ronon/keller

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daisyscrapper February 5 2008, 04:39:47 UTC

Ok, folks, it's not that good. I found it REALLY hard to set it up on Earth for some reason. But I tried my best :) Hope you enjoy it! There will probably be only one more chapter after this.

redjewel2662 February 5 2008, 06:28:34 UTC

Great chapter! I love the friend between the three of them and i love how sheppard and ronon are so protective of her!

daisyscrapper February 5 2008, 23:32:11 UTC

Thank you!

chapters 1 - 9 rac80 February 5 2008, 21:05:06 UTC

this was a very cute chapter. I loved the idea of ronon nervous at meeting her dad. I also never thought how hard it would be to visit family and yet not be able to tell them what you are doing with your life. You have done a very good job with this entire storyline.

Re: chapters 1 - 9 daisyscrapper February 5 2008, 23:31:53 UTC

Thank you! I just posted up chapter 10, and I think chapter 11 will be my last one! It's been fun, but I really like writing about the preship rather than the actual long-term relationship. I may begin another one in a few weeks.