Building up for Romance chapter 4

Feb 07, 2008 14:31



Ronon was grumpy at dinner. Sheppard watched for a few minutes as the big man swirled the food around on his plate. Amazed that he wasn’t eating, Sheppard decided to pull out whatever was bothering him.

“Ok, out with it. What’s wrong with you?” Not beating around the bush, Sheppard just plunged forward.

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accalialee February 8 2008, 07:25:02 UTC
Really cute story!!!

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made_of_toast February 9 2008, 01:29:49 UTC
Loved it! It was so awkward and cute jumbled into one, just like Ronon and Keller :D

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_woody_lein February 9 2008, 04:03:35 UTC
Oh, the end.:(

Thank you for this sweet story.

Bye Woody:)

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nath_42 February 9 2008, 23:02:14 UTC
Nice story. Cute. I would totally see Ronon shooting the guy. In fact, he's lucky he's still alive.
(and btw Lorne is sweet, he deserves a lovely woman, I think he is a family man, isn't he ?)

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daisyscrapper February 10 2008, 14:18:48 UTC
Thank you! The comments make my day! I can't believe I wrote that much! I just had one day off from work and the story just came to me. It was fun to write!

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