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cbomb March 30 2013, 11:59:25 UTC
1/? No warnings, some explicit language ( ... )

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cbomb March 30 2013, 12:01:27 UTC
2/? No warnings, some explicit language ( ... )

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daisysusan March 30 2013, 16:14:30 UTC
omg, this is amazing (and I'm loling forever that you're writing it)

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bessyboo March 31 2013, 02:09:38 UTC
what no how BUT THIS IS PERFECT????? I NEED MOAR LIKE I NEED AIR OMG

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camshaft22 March 31 2013, 06:48:00 UTC
Nrgh, so good.

I'm definitely looking forward to more

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cbomb April 1 2013, 01:01:03 UTC
this is great, really looking forward to more :)

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cbomb April 1 2013, 10:35:31 UTC
3/? No warnings, some explicit language ( ... )

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cbomb April 1 2013, 10:37:55 UTC
4/? No warnings, some explicit language ( ... )

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cbomb April 1 2013, 10:41:37 UTC
5/? Um. This bit is.. PG-13 ( ... )

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cbomb April 1 2013, 10:43:53 UTC
6/? Um. This bit is.. PG-13?

“Oh.” Is all Jeff says. Jared opens his eyes and Jeff is staring at him like a play that’s beginning to make sense, “I see.”

“You... do?” Jared replies.

“I have a house y’know. A house that isn’t also occupied by your two hulking hockey player older brothers.”

“Oh my God, will you shut up about them?” Jared bites hard, vindictively, against Jeff’s neck.

“Nope.” Jeff says, laughing, clambering off Jared and grabbing for his hand. “I really won’t, you’re going to have to stop me. With your dick. In my mouth.”

“Oh my God.” Jared repeats, another tone entirely this time.

(AN: writing comment fic is really impractical when it gets stupid-long like this, apologies for my weird-ass paragraph breaks /o\)

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daisysusan April 1 2013, 17:02:58 UTC
ilu ♥

(Sorry your commentfic is long. Not really.)

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celuran April 2 2013, 22:36:56 UTC
you are a terrible person and i love you. also i love potential secret handshakes with david towes.

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