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dakarasuki97

I'll Give You Forever [12/12] FINAL

Oct 17, 2010 22:21

Title: I’ll Give You Forever
Pairing: Choi Seunghyunx Kwon Jiyong (GTOP)
Author:dakarasuki97
Rating: This chapter is... NC-17... Fail!smut ahead... read at own risk. ^^
Genre: angst, fluff, romance, idk
Warnings: language and this chapter has smut. but there is fluff too!
Summary: Kwon Jiyong has everything… beauty, popularity, grades, ( Read more... )

f:big bang, p: seunghyun(top)/jiyong

Comments 54

wishiwuzkagome October 18 2010, 02:51:16 UTC

SPOT. bbl though I have an essay to write.

wishiwuzkagome October 18 2010, 04:46:54 UTC

omnomnomnom :Q____

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dakarasuki97 October 18 2010, 04:01:29 UTC

Awww thanks! I'm glad you liked my smut! hehehe. I'm very self conscious about my smut writing abilities. heheh.

Lol, I know, I giggled a little too... but it had to be said. hehe.

Yah! I'm so glad Ji is finally happy! Happy endings FTW!!! Yeah!!

Thnaks so much for reading love!! ♥

altairfangirl October 18 2010, 03:01:39 UTC

I loved the ending soooo much! (I think thats how it would go with my husband, I would be so freakin excited that he asked me to marry him that I would run out of the room like a crazy person....screaming yes all the way :) (and then I would comense the giant crying bear hug session) srry I am rambling I loved the whole story, I might just have to read it over :D

dakarasuki97 October 18 2010, 04:02:36 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked the ending! yeah! That's how I think I would to it too. I'd be so happy and excited and crazy.. heheh I wanted Ji to have that happiness in this story since he never had that before. Heheh Seunghyunnie brings the happiness to Ji heheh.

Thank you so much! I'll be so honored if you think it is good enough to reread! ♥♥

k_pop4life October 18 2010, 03:34:07 UTC

OANSINQPLSNXINENQLPSNSKNXJJDNEIQPWLS!!
/breaths /tries to calm down /FAILS
Wonderful absutely amazing! Beautiful undescriable!! Im blown away
Baby that was truly awesome and i loved the smut!! You improved A LOT
Im truly in love with this story aishh soo sad its over.
I enjoyed reading this soo much it made me all fluffy and giggly and *sigh* it made my day a whole lot better. I lovee how YB, Daesung and Seungri help Ji and Huynnie to be together :)
And seunghyun giving them the thumbs up LMAO
Oh oh and lets not forget Hunnie proposing to Ji is the sweetest thing ever!!
I love youuuuuu!! And i sincerely loved THIS story so much.

dakarasuki97 October 18 2010, 04:04:42 UTC

Awww thank you baby! I'm glad you think I improved. I hope one day I will be able to write smut like some of the great GTOP smut I have read. lol. Until then, I feel really awkward writing it.

Yay!! Thank you I'm sad it's over too. hehehe. Yah! BB is family and they support each other no matter what! yeah!!

Seunghyun is silly lol.

Im glad you liked the proposal. Hehehe. I was originally going to have Ji propose to Seunghyun, but I wanted Ji to freak out and be happy and stuff lol.

I'm so glad you like it BB. Love you too! ♥♥

k_pop4life October 18 2010, 12:44:02 UTC

You'll probably get better so dont worry about it :D

I wonder how a wedding between this two would be!! If only they could have babies oh man that would the cutest thing ever /daydreamss

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dakarasuki97 October 18 2010, 04:05:02 UTC

Hahah thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it and thought my smut wasn't fail. heheh.

Thank you!! ♥♥