Comments | dallyra: Fic: Shall We Dance?

dallyra

Fic: Shall We Dance?

Jun 12, 2005 21:33

Wow. I wrote a fic. I feel so proud of myself! I haven't written anything for well over a month, but this idea just hit me a couple of days ago and just wouldn't leave me alone until I wrote it.

It's in the Doctor Who fandom, Doctor/Rose, and I'll call it PG-13, just to be safe.

Thanks, as always, to notsoliljames for being my combined cheerleader and beta, ( Read more... )

Comments 28

larakailyn June 12 2005, 20:55:54 UTC

Oh wow...that was lovely. I loved the different types of dances you used to illustrate what they were going through. And the ending was so beautifully angsty and sad. I can see her having those dreams.

Wonderful job.

dallyra June 13 2005, 21:03:44 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :D

eien_herrison June 12 2005, 21:08:13 UTC

*sniffle* I should really stop reading these fics after subjecting myself to the Bad Wolf promo over and over again.

Loved the time travel being referenced to the dancing; it has been used for quite a number of things in the series, after all ;)

I'd have to say this is perfectly angsty, not too harch but not too little either, and I think the ending is just perfect.

eien_herrison June 12 2005, 21:08:50 UTC

Gack! Not Bad Wolf, Parting of the Ways!

dallyra June 13 2005, 21:05:33 UTC

Thank you. :D

And I can't even bear to watch that promo. After being in denial for so long, it seems impossible that it's happening next week. Cept it's not, because I'm still in denial, and probably will be until we see the new Doctor appear.

rionaleonhart June 12 2005, 21:13:13 UTC

...you have taken my heart and done bad things to it.

Seriously. There is a pain in my chest and tears in my eyes and, although that may just mean I'm dying, I think it's due to the fact that you've just taken everything I was subconsciously dreading about the regeneration and displayed it to me in poignant fic form.

Wonderful work.

(But you're mean.)

dallyra June 13 2005, 21:07:14 UTC

I'm sorry!

Actually, no I'm not, because you've just made me grin so much. Thank you!

calapine June 12 2005, 21:13:56 UTC

I really enjoyed that - loved the way you used the dancing metaphor.

dallyra June 13 2005, 21:07:59 UTC

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it!

gamiila June 12 2005, 21:30:58 UTC

Beautiful, intense, terrifying ficlet -- bravo!

dallyra June 13 2005, 21:08:32 UTC

Thank you!