Fic: Shall We Dance?

[dallyra]

Wow. I wrote a fic. I feel so proud of myself! I haven't written anything for well over a month, but this idea just hit me a couple of days ago and just wouldn't leave me alone until I wrote it.

It's in the Doctor Who fandom, Doctor/Rose, and I'll call it PG-13, just to be safe.

Thanks, as always, to notsoliljames for being my combined cheerleader and beta,

Comments

[notsoliljames]

Love it. Really. It gets better the more I read it.

You're a fabulous writer, silly. ♥

[dallyra]

♥ ya, babes. Thanks for all of your help with this.

[ex_artbox613]

Beautifully written.

I don't want the season to end!

[dallyra]

Me either! I just know I'm going to cry so much...

But I'm in denial! He's not leaving! It's just an elaborate cover up by the BBC to keep the ending secret!

Thanks for commenting. :D

References to dance

[athenebelle]

I adored how you used the various forms of dance to describe who they were. First she's not in rythmn with him (because she's just getting the hang of time travel) then the types of dances (salsa being joyous and slightly seductive but not nearly as much so as the tango which has it's roots in the Brothels of Brazil) decribing their feelings. Then at the very end describing how he was different and causing them to be out of synch again.

Athene

p.s. You can tell I've taken dance appreciation and adore dancing (although like Rose in this piece I can barely get my fiance to watch my performances, let alone join me on the dance floor).

Re: References to dance

[dallyra]

Thanks for your comments. Those were the effects I was going for, so I'm so glad they came through. :D Glad you liked it!

[kyizi]

okay...I might cry...

That was beautifully written. I loved the metaphors of the dances and just...wow. :)

[nohara_megami]

Owie...that hurt :( But it was so beautiful and wonderfully written that I think I can deal with the pain ^_^