Fic: Tuesday

[dallyra]

I've written two fics in two weeks! I feel kinda proud of that, as I've been writing at the speed of about a fic a month recently, if not even slower. This is the first of my Two Word Fic Challenge fics, and it's for dollsome. The words were 'Kate/Sawyer' and 'Tuesday'.

It's Kate/Sawyer (obviously) and rated PG-13. Thanks as always to notsoliljames for being my

Comments

[gossamerwings32]

How do I not have a Kate/Sawyer icon... Oh well. I do not approve of the steaminess you used. Tsk tsk, you are far to young to write about this sort of body contact... well unless you are writing about Mal/Inara, Zoe/Wash, Kaylee/Simon, Macadamia... ok fine. Great ficlet.

[dollsome]

Ooh, that was awesome! Thank you. :D You had both of their characters down so well, and I love the idea of Kate sort of playing the sweet little heroine and secretly finding herself completely bored with it -- it just seems very fitting of her. I think my favourite part of this piece was the dialogue; you had it perfectly for both of them, and it built up so well. Fantastic amount of tension going on. :)

"Stop acting like I don’t. I know who you are. You’re a murderer. You hate yourself for it every minute of the day, but deep down inside, you’re a little bit in love with it as well. It makes you feel dark and dangerous, doesn’t it? Makes you feel powerful.”

So much love for that!

Once again, great work. :) Thanks!

[jayl]

Wow, Rhi, your Sawyer voice is SO spot-on, I loved it! I looooove this kind of hidden relationship plot, and it even seems within the possibility of cannon. Whee!

I didn't realize how much I missed LOST and my kate/sawyer fangirling until just now. :D

[spiffychocolate]

Brilliant, Rhi, just brilliant. You wrote Sawyer so perfectly, god I miss the show :(

Again, brilliant :D.

[paging_dr_house]

hummm, that was good, hot and yet PG..lol Me likey.