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May 08, 2013 20:19

"Did you get the beer?" Hank pulled taco shells and salsa from the grocery bag and set them on the counter. Taco shells go in the pantry, salsa in the refrigerator. Is that so hard ( Read more... )

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dampscribbler May 9 2013, 03:28:34 UTC
This was flash fiction from a Twitter prompt.

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kaleidoscopeeye May 9 2013, 05:32:38 UTC
I enjoyed it. I felt like I was in the room.

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dampscribbler May 9 2013, 17:35:21 UTC
Thanks! I had hoped for more "story" there -- particularly having the beginning-middle-end elements, but I'm rusty, and for what it is I rather like it.

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dampscribbler May 9 2013, 03:34:53 UTC
I hope Hank remembers to get his Coors out of the car.

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kaleidoscopeeye May 9 2013, 05:32:54 UTC
50/50

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dampscribbler May 9 2013, 17:35:32 UTC
:-D

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dampscribbler May 9 2013, 21:10:21 UTC
Thanks. :-) Everything I know about them is on the page right there, so at the moment I've got nowhere to go with it. I probably won't develop it further, unless the characters start expecting me to.

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