i wrote this poem a while back, and it had this line in it that totally went with this story... *pulls out flash drive*
..."And hatred will not make those feelings inside your heart disappear. Killing them with certainty, yes, they will hang heavy and not be forgotten."
Okay, so not the part about hatred... but I always thought that love would never disappear. It'll die, yeah, but it'll still be there in that agonizing way... okay, I'll shut up now.
but yeah, you wrote this really well... I liked the tone Brendon had throughout it.
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Oh my god, that was so depressing. Beautiful, though, I loved it. ♥
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(^in a good way)
i wrote this poem a while back, and it had this line in it that totally went with this story... *pulls out flash drive*
..."And hatred will not make those feelings
inside your heart disappear. Killing them
with certainty, yes, they will hang
heavy and not be forgotten."
Okay, so not the part about hatred... but I always thought that love would never disappear. It'll die, yeah, but it'll still be there in that agonizing way...
okay, I'll shut up now.
but yeah, you wrote this really well... I liked the tone Brendon had throughout it.
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Thanks. (: I'm glad you liked it.
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