Comments | danang1970: FIC: Free Form (A-Team movieverse, G)

danang1970

FIC: Free Form (A-Team movieverse, G)

Oct 11, 2011 13:37

Title: Free Form
Rating: G
Fandom: A-Team movieverse
Genre: Humour
Warnings: Pure fluff, don't look for a plot
Summary: Murdock experiments and Face tries to be sneaky.

( Free Form (1/1) )

face, a-team, fanfic, murdock, humour

Comments 8

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danang1970 October 11 2011, 05:00:11 UTC

Thank you! :) Murdock is too much fun - can never stay away from him for long.

indigo_angels October 11 2011, 06:27:21 UTC

You didn't ruin it at all! I loved it!!!!!!!!!

And I am so glad you chose a different username for Face from the one I had, it meant I could play 'who is Face'?

I thought cLitgirl might be the kind of amusing name he might pick, but then suspected VoxPop with the FUCK YEAH - the fighter jet clips confirmed it though! (and the towels, only Face would want fresh towels every time!)

Wow - that plot bunny did not like it's hutch at all yeah?

I loved this, so glad you picked it up, they were so perfectly in character, could imagine the whole thing beautifully! And of course, if the mood ever took you, you could always post some more for him! ;)

Singing in the shower? Rude not to!

danang1970 October 11 2011, 07:43:15 UTC

Thank you! Yes, Murdock very well might update this blog again... eep. :D THanks again for the bunny.

sonora_coneja October 12 2011, 17:28:32 UTC

Haha! This is amazing! The stream-of-consciousness is a fantastic way of representing Murdock here, I can see him writing like this, completely. Love Face's comments under VoxPop (especially the balls-towel thing, he would), and it's all just perfect. I think my favorite is the untitled with I miss flying. Made me sad. It's hard to think about Murdock losing the sky like that...

danang1970 October 12 2011, 22:06:48 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad this little nothing piece was readable. :P I always feel for Murdock when I think of him not able to fly.

sonora_coneja October 12 2011, 22:15:42 UTC

This piece is hilarious, so no worries on that front! And yes, Murdock not being able to fly...in my mind, it's one of the only things that kept him somewhat sane in the Army.

luddite_heart October 22 2011, 10:28:35 UTC

I'll admit, I didn't see Face's sneaky presence at all, until I read the loving reviews above. (I've never read a real blog before; are random comments from casual browsers normal?) I always adore Murdock's free association, and I was especially tickled with the ee cummings homage! A very fun story!

tripatch June 4 2012, 06:52:24 UTC

*giggling like mad*

Oh, Murdock, this is exactly what I expect from him if he had a blog - and Face! Trying so hard to be stealthy! ♥