Comments | dancinggrimm: Chapter 14

dancinggrimm

Chapter 14

Oct 05, 2011 19:28

Once again I've failed to not be crap about posting things on here and I'm sorry. Various things have been eating my brain lately, which I'll go into in more detail later, but I've managed to pull together the next chapter and it's now up on AFF ( Read more... )

Comments 11

tmelange October 5 2011, 19:30:06 UTC

Thanks for the heads up! I will read this as soon as I get to a place that actually allows me to access aff.net. LOL

dancinggrimm October 6 2011, 18:05:13 UTC

Damn those censors!

khaoskomix October 5 2011, 22:09:09 UTC

YES.

dancinggrimm October 7 2011, 16:57:12 UTC

HELL YES!

...what were you yessing about?

khaoskomix October 8 2011, 10:38:41 UTC

Just very pleased to see an update. I love this story because I have a big thing for size differences, bossy bottoms who are really in charge and people having sex because they really like sex (none of that rape is love crap you know?).

This story has all of these and is well written, with a plot driving the story, and a hidden plot within the sex of the Prince finding out what he really likes. It's so much better than the generic slash fiction steps method of kissing, handjob, blowjob, anal, eternal love forevers.

All of these factors make me pleased to see updates. I'm just terrible at reviewing because I mainly read on my phone, but I wanted to comment to let you know I enjoy what you do. Yes indeed.

dancinggrimm October 8 2011, 11:49:55 UTC

Thank you so much. Wow, it's nice to hear what you think in such detail. I'm really glad that my story fulfills so many requirements for you. :)

mee_eep October 6 2011, 09:50:47 UTC

Hey, easier to comment on lj, hope that's ok?

Love the chapter, the plot thickens ^__^
The gift was nice as is any situation that has Gerulf make Mihai squeak! ;)

I liked the 'he was goimg to ruin his back' line, it made it seem more real. And the kiss, awwwwww (that's hopefully not too spoilery for people)

dancinggrimm October 7 2011, 16:57:58 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And they've now been shagging for ages, one would hope they'd manage a kiss sooner or later.

mee_eep October 7 2011, 17:10:29 UTC

LOL true. I still think of Mihai as a very experienced virgin though ;) Gerulf is certainly dedicated to changing that.

fuumasfrog October 7 2011, 20:23:06 UTC

Awesome chapter! I love how Mihai is acting all awkward. And that kiss... aww... Gerulf, honey, that Snow White needs a few more kisses to get out of his glass coffin!
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! ^^

dancinggrimm October 9 2011, 11:11:26 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. Awkward Mihai is so much fun to write it's unreal.