Blue Prince! Woooo!

[dancinggrimm]

A new chapter of the Blue Prince, in which Gerulf makes and hears a declaration and finds himself unexpectedly going up the social ladder.

Enjoy :)

http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600101053&chapter=20

Comments

[tras_la_ventana]

I might have missed Mihai a bit in this chapter (what can I say, I have developed a soft spot for him), but still I enjoyed it very much, as usual

[dancinggrimm]

I'm glad you're enjoying it so much, and it's nice to get such in depth responses.

Gerulf is definitely more intelligent than he realises, and he'll get there eventually, don't worry. And at least The Banded Cat would be a change of pace for Mihai, having been so cooped up all his life :D

Adara's great. i originally only included her as a minor character, sort of a means to an end for all the times Gerulf had to be present at various places he wouldn't usually go. She's become more and more useful though. She would make a great politician. And I don't think she's blind to Tynne's feelings, but it hasn't occured to her to even consider the direction her daughter's feelings have taken, despite having a surrogate son who is gay.

And Queen Sigrid...time will tell with her ;)

[tmelange]

I think Adara is a very distinct character. You should do more with her.

[luci0logy]

Yay!

[dancinggrimm]

:)

[tmelange]

The plot thickens! Great continuation here, with all sorts of possibilities. Bravo, and thanks for the update!

[dancinggrimm]

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)I've only a few more clues to drop before everything Gerulf needs to work it out is made known. I wonder if anyone will get there before him...

[voidmancer]

Awesome! Just the thing to take my mind off of things. Gerulf and his choice of words during his little interrogation was entertaining ;) HAHA

Thank you! :D

[dancinggrimm]

I'm glad you liked it. I was quite pleased with that carefully worded conversation, like they were all having tea over a snake pit.

I hope the things you needed distracting from aren't too awful.

[mee_eep]

YAY!

[myranda_lynn]

You know, I have to agree with you, the Queen seems a good deal more pitiable after this chapter.

And ah, I'm just going to stick a sock in it per instructions and wait till we see how this all shakes out before I open my big yap again.

Definitely looking forward to the coming chapters. :)

[dancinggrimm]

Wow, I completely missed this comment when you posted it, sorry I didn't respond before.

There's a lot more to the Queen's situation than anyone knows. Pity my well be the way to go...or possibly not :D