The Blue Prince Chapter 2 - Princely Desires pt1

[dancinggrimm]

“I agree to your trial, your Majesty. I hope I won’t
disappoint you.”

“Excellent. Please follow me.”

Gerulf followed the Prince across the broad corridor,
obediently opening the door there when the Prince paused outside it. The
bedroom they entered then was as lavish as the parlour, if not more so. It was
dominated by an oversized four poster bed, hung

Comments

[mee_eep]

For a moment there I thought it was a new update, but then I read it again anyway ;)

Very Hot. Very.

I love the cool control of the prince and his attempt to keep that even as he came apart. Gerulf's cheerfulness about his duty makes me smile. He make be a mere servant but he's never simply following orders.

oh but some of your coding is off, the italics.

[dancinggrimm]

Argh! Those damn italics! I'll fix them when I'm in a calmer mood, thanks for pointing them out.

I'm glad you liked the scene. Gerulf is very much the mischevious disobedient type, but like Zita says, he's not really a servant but not relly anything else.

[mee_eep]

:) You're brave posting while LJ is being temperamental with code.

Yep and at this point it's just one hell of a job application ;)

oh and I have phases of leaving long comments or simple squees - sorries #^_^#

[dancinggrimm]

No worries, I like getting feedback of any kind...well obviously as long as it's not mean, but you aren't mean so it's all good :)

hoorah!

[yellow_jubilee]

you posted :D and i just love how near every chapter has interesting plot and then sexy times!

Re: hoorah!

[dancinggrimm]

Hooray! I'm glad you are enjoying it. I'll try and catch up with some more posting this evening.