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dandanfung

Chimes [in the distant]

Oct 02, 2011 22:55

Title: Chimes [in the distance]
Fandom: Infinite
Pairing: Hoya/Woohyun
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance
Summary: Everything has a focal point, the resonance echoing away, drawing different, parallel lines.

( The wind chimes dangling by the front window began to waver against a particular strong gust of wind, and Woohyun looks up at the front porch, his grip on the wooden spoon stopping the gyrations, the batter almost ready. )

rating: pg, m: hoya, genre: romance, fandom: infinite, m: woohyun

Comments 12

thyluvlyname212 October 3 2011, 06:47:36 UTC

THIS CAN'T BE A ONE-SHOT... PLEASE? IDK I FEEL LIKE IT'S NOT DONE >_<" LIKE THE ENDING CAN'T BE THE ENDING, ONLY THE END OF THE FIRST PART OR SMTH... >_<" ^_^" mayb a sequel...?

dandanfung October 3 2011, 08:22:59 UTC

haha, there's nothing more to add though, it's just a figment of reality mixed with too much fantasy.

there's no concrete sequel except that in one universe, they both die because it's the end of the world, and the other universe is merely them being together.

^__^ thanks for reading.

gween_taiyou October 3 2011, 07:15:54 UTC

SEQUEL PLS LIKE OH MY GOD

dandanfung October 3 2011, 08:21:26 UTC

.__________. troll harder. myungyeol look stoned in your picture >:(

engraved_16 October 3 2011, 08:12:19 UTC

AFNSJKDKFJSEHFSJKKL;
oh god, so confused about the end >.<... woohyun and hoya are not together? or hoya likes woohyun but woohyun's with someone else or maybe woohyun's already dead D: haha idk im making weird assumptions right now.

hmm are you perhaps making a sequel to clarify? coz im a bit confused. xD

none the less, your write sooo beautifully :)) im practically in love with it!

loved this alot, the plot is so intriguing yet vague (on my part since lol) and there always needs to be more wooya in this world! :DD
♥♥♥

engraved_16 October 3 2011, 08:14:43 UTC

opps i meant woohyun and hoya are* together haha

dandanfung October 3 2011, 08:25:48 UTC

actually, the fic is divided into two universes, the first is where both of them die, and the tidal wave that hits Hoya merely rustles as a gust of wind in the second universe, where Woohyun is at home baking.

I just played around with space perception and that type of thing.

there's nothing to write a sequel because I'd end up writing other universes using another common focal point ( dying chimes when the wave hits--> wind chimes in their house)

but thank you for reading, and yes, I'll be writing a lot more wooya in the future!!

engraved_16 October 3 2011, 09:57:29 UTC

ahh i see now! thank you for clarifying ^^

the_night_thief October 3 2011, 09:06:17 UTC

It's....over?
I mean....realy. It's over, just like that?
I don't understand though.
Hoya's desperate to call soemone, his time is running out -- does run out -- and he never makes the call. He dies, we can presume.
But then he's coming home to Woohyun (who I find makes an adorable housewife).
.....
Wait.
Another universe?
Hoya's thoughts of their love (or his love?) transcendding time and space -- is housewife!Woohyun and workerman!Hoya another universe? It makes sense (and suddenly I'm thinking of Tsubasa).

In any case, I loved this.
The measure of time in both really moves the piece along, and the utter desperation in the first half just tears at your heart.
Beautiful and stunning.

I'd love a sequel, to be quite honest, but more in the sense that I want to know where Woohyun was in the first world (if that is what it was). And perhaps a view of their other worlds (because Tsubasa has spoiled me).

dandanfung October 3 2011, 18:30:34 UTC

haha, it's over~ well this segment is merely over, but there are infinite amount of tangents.

Yeah, loosely based on timelapse, space travel, tsubasa was one of my favourite animes, so I tend to really want to experiment with all the different worlds, kinda gives me more freedom not to commit to one certain setting.

I'm glad the angsty bits at the start worked, because I kinda tried to make the desparation seem really apparent and then contrast it with the happiness of the second part.

I'm so glad you liked it, but I mean, there are so many possibilities for continuation, I don't think a sequel would be plausible, but I've written other fics similar to this one for different fandoms. \o/

volatileflame October 3 2011, 23:15:09 UTC

interesting. i'm not sure i completely understood the fic (my assumption is something along the lines of parallel universes or dream sequences), but i thought it was interesting nonetheless.

dandanfung October 10 2011, 23:25:58 UTC

there's no real fic premise, but along the lines of parallel universe would work fine, and dream sequences sound so intriguing, I just might try exploring that in another fic soon!

thank you for reading <3