037: Out of My Reach (But I'm Reaching Out For You)

Oct 19, 2012 14:40

Title: Out of My Reach (But I'm Reaching Out For You)
Pairing: YunJae, hinted YooSu
Rating: PG (-13?)
Summary: Jaejoong discovers that life comes in full circle with insecurities and realizations in turn, insecurity is only natural in love, and love is something impossible to ignore.  Title is a reference to this song.

Originally written for a fic Read more... )

pairing: yoochun/junsu, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, length: oneshot, pairing: ot5 friendship, fandom: dbsk

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muramatsu_aoi October 19 2012, 20:00:28 UTC
I'm glad you are back.. beautiful <3 somehow reading this, made me forget it is 2012 & got me back to 2007.. i love the theme of letting go and it all coming back to you..

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byuldeureul October 20 2012, 17:05:16 UTC

I'm glad to be back too, darling. SO glad to be back ;;;;;;;; And hearing that means a lot to me, really, especially from a longtime reader. Thank you so much for reading this and I'm glad that the implicit theme came through! :')

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dulanis October 20 2012, 06:53:23 UTC
So so sweet and romantic :D

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byuldeureul October 20 2012, 17:06:37 UTC

Ahahaha maybe this should have included a WAFF warning because it's...pretty sappy towards the end, huh ;; I'm glad it didn't detract from your enjoyment of the story, though. Thank you for reading and commenting as well! :')

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byuldeureul October 21 2012, 14:50:55 UTC
G-Goodness, so many compliments within this one comment kjfhsknla;gls/d I'm really touched, darling. Touched to know you felt that way and can't help but agree with your point on Junsu! Though it's been ages since I read DBSK fics regularly, I know that - in the ones I've read - several portrayals of Junsu just...don't align with my headcanon for him, making it quite hard to enjoy the fic as a whole ( ... )

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byuldeureul October 22 2012, 19:27:06 UTC

sometimes i feel like the innocence is played up too much <-- yesssssssssss exactly~ That's probably my biggest quibble with Junsu as characterized in fanfic as well. It's not that I mind an innocent!Junsu (he did occasionally give off that aura to me, especially back then), but there's so much more to a person as well? I always got the sense, too, that if there was anyone in the group who had a philosopher's soul besides Changmin, it was Junsu. He's cute, sure, but his soul must run impossibly deep...it's easy to see that, just based on the songs he writes and the way he performs alone ( ... )

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hitomi2oo7 October 22 2012, 02:26:41 UTC
( ; _ ; ) So beautiful... Ur writing is just perfect... I felt all those emotions as if I was there next to them witnessing all this!
OMG! U are truly a master of word and I feel in love with YoonJae all over again. I really hope their love for each other in real life will also become their own world and no one will be able to destroy it beside Yunho & Jaejoong themselves... Thank U so much for shearing this story with Us and Ur hard work on it~^^

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byuldeureul October 22 2012, 19:18:59 UTC

Ahhhh it's been a long time since I posted anything here, let alone wrote/edited a piece about YunJae......and if their emotions came through the words to you, then that's the biggest compliment of all to me! ///////////// Part of what I aim to do, after all, is convey a certain "feeling" when I write - and it sounds like the feeling came through full force for you :') Thank YOU for the absolutely heartwarming comment, dear, and for reading as well!

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torakiss February 14 2013, 22:19:38 UTC
“screw the apples and oranges…and I choose being part of your world instead?”

i growled in real life (〃⌒▽⌒〃)/ oneechanyan, please let me be your apprentice!! ;n; technically, i love the way you blend adjectives and make them connect with the other words. and your characterization is daskflasdfjajdsflkas a timid jaejoong is such a cutie ; ; and the dialogue! superb dialogue!! ;ww; i was reading this as a bedtime story for myself because fluff makes the my world go round and it keeps the bad dreams away ;u; the ending was quite cheesy but kasdfjlkads let me be your apprentice oneechanyan!!! ;u;

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byuldeureul February 17 2013, 20:06:00 UTC

oh gosh i'm----- sorry i didn't get to this until now, kichie-ah ; a ; idk how but i TOTALLY forget to check my emails and lj notifs in the last few days sdjskhlrj;dskh so i only saw this and your other comment just this morning!! so y e p this reply is definitely late and i wish it hadn't been b-but yeah (; ;) just know that i'm glad to get to it now!!

also, considering how old this piece is, i'm so flattered beyond belief you felt this was enjoyable (if not extremely cheesy lmao but, then again, whenever i consider yunjae pre-......2008 thereabout, i can't help but think they WOULD be that cheesy to me ^A^;;) and perfect for a bedtime story! ♥

uhuhuuhuehreughgh and being my apprentice.....? *A*;; じゃさあ、私の弟子がなりたいならいいんですよ~ i'll teach you as much as i possibly can~~~~~~~ \o//

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