your translation's just a little off (lt/ng)

[dangerbears]

title: your translation's just a little off.
pairing: nick grimshaw/louis tomlinson (sorry)
disclaimer: hilariously untrue.
word count: ~9,500
summary: AU. so louis kind of doesn't like nick. like at all. really. he swears.
notes: okay OKAY DON'T YELL AT ME I'M REALLY SORRY, this is the one and only time this will happen, I'M JUST SO INTERESTED IN

Comments

[flimsy]

I apologize for spamming you in chat with my excitement, but I am going to continue here because I absolutely ADORE this. Their dynamic is so, so good, I love their banter and micro-fights, how they both have their walls up and try to bring the other one's down at the same time, how neither is actually willing to concede ground. I like how beneath Louis' exterior, his insecurities are shining through, and how it's both so obvious, but also how he's so good at hiding them, but how Nick like, understands him and treats him just right. I love how Harry ties into all this - how he's an accidental catalyst of a sort.

Ugh and then there were all those moments where I was squeeing and hiding my face, because jealous Nick? UGH. Protective Nick? JFC.

I just, really really loved this. ♥_♥

[dangerbears]

i'm so so so glad you liked this, nika, omg. thank you so much for all your encouragement and help and EVERYTHING!! love you

[estrella30]

HOW. HOW ARE YOU AMAZING. omg dude, this is SO GOOD. hahaha I LOVE IT .omg. and I can like imagine how much you wanted to KILL YOURSELF writing it so, THANK YOU FOR PERSEVERING.

ugh. SO GOOD. really, this is fantastic. ILUUUUUUUUUUU <3

[dangerbears]

hahahahah i mean!!! nick/louis is really really a thing for me and i'm INTO IT. just. you know. louis/everyone pretty much. anyway. glad you liked this!!! thank you so much

[mozarts_piano]

FUCK YOU JUST FUCK YOU

AHHH READING BRB

[mozarts_piano]

Louis manages to receive an upwards of twenty comments on his arse, spanning the spectrum of complimentary to fucking illegal.
there's my little ray of sunshine! :D god, i am sick but this is the ultimate cure, lord. i am so excited for the bitchiness.

Greg James on drums
YES. OKAY. BEAUTIFUL.

"Aw," Nick coos. "Did the poor little pretty boy not find anyone good enough?"
Louis clenches his jaw.
yes. achieved. they would be like the ultimate set of bitches, like, everyone would want to be bffls with them but if you crossed them you'd be fucked.

Louis just worries, because if Harry sleeps with Nick, if Harry falls in love with Nick, and Nick hurts him, Louis will probably have to go to jail for murder.
but see that's why i love louis and nick so much irl because they can both tease the fuck out of harry and be awful to him but at the end of the day they both care so much about him and are so gentle and tender to him and hdjlkashakd also, yeah louis would be fucked (literally and figuratively) in prison.

Harry says, "Come on, Lou

[mozarts_piano]

Nick expertly tears off a piece of his croissant and dips it in his hot chocolate. Louis watches, disgusted.
i must try that sometime. it sounds delicious.

"You're in public with me," Nick says. "Are you embarrassed?"
"Dreadfully," Louis responds. "Literally if anyone I know sees us, I'm ducking under the table."
but they're both so witty and good!

Louis grins wickedly. "Wouldn't you like to know?" he says, glancing up at Nick through his eyelashes.
literally, tommo the fucking tease, jesus christ lou. i can't even imagine the band on tour buses, he'd just say something sexual and then walk off, get into his bed and go to sleep and the rest of them would just be like - well fuck me, and sit there all awkwardly in their arousal. yep.

"Alex," he says, shaking Louis' hand and winking, before looking back to Nick. "Grimmy, what a delicious opening gift, I'm so honoured. If you see anything that inspires you, Louis, please just say the word." He winks lewdly.ugh. actually just like, shuddered. ohmygod. uggggh ick. (also i love that

[redscarfe]

Ahhhhh this is so great! Just... I've had ridiculous amounts of Louis feelings these past few days especially and this just fit RIGHT IN with them, like the vulnerabilities and the wall he builds around himself, and how Nick's kinda the same? Ughh perfect.. *___________*

[dangerbears]

ahhh thank you so much for this comment! i'm so glad you liked it xxx

[galaxy_soup]

Ugh, no, don't ever be sorry about having written this because this is my new favorite thing ever. Like I love your Louis/Harry fics already, but there's so much good banter when you throw Nick into the mix and to top it off you managed to make it something besides just jealous hate-sex fic. Everyone has delightful layers to their personality and reasons for their actions. And I love how Harry admits that this is the first time he can't read Louis, and accidentally gets them together instead of going the easy, obvious route and making him play matchmaker on purpose.

"I hope you realise I'm going to hold the fuck out of your hand." - absolute favorite line.

It's just all so goooood. I highly encourage more fic with Nick from you.

[dangerbears]

ahahaha ohhh i might write more of this. maybe. ish. don't hold me to that!! hahaha
but seriously, thank you so much, dude, i'm so glad you liked this and i'm glad that it came off okay ahh!! thank you thank you <33