your translation's just a little off (lt/ng)

[dangerbears]

title: your translation's just a little off.
pairing: nick grimshaw/louis tomlinson (sorry)
disclaimer: hilariously untrue.
word count: ~9,500
summary: AU. so louis kind of doesn't like nick. like at all. really. he swears.
notes: okay OKAY DON'T YELL AT ME I'M REALLY SORRY, this is the one and only time this will happen, I'M JUST SO INTERESTED IN

Comments

[shrdmdnssftw]

Oh my god, this was so lovely. Like, actually, I completely and totally adored this. I love the whole Louis and Nick dynamic, and although I'm not usually one for bar AUs, I really loved the way that it worked in this one.

Nick punching that dickhead in the stomach, can I just say, was a great point. And Louis not realising that Nick liked him, not Harry.

Ugh this was just so good and your writing style is really lovely and I just loved your characterisation of Louis, and just everything about this.

[dangerbears]

ahh thank you so much!! i'm so glad you liked louis, as he is very dear to my heart I DON'T KNOW IF YOU'VE NOTICED hahaha. thank you so much, though, i'm really glad you liked this <3

[bb_blackbird]

don't be sorry, this is awesome.

[dangerbears]

thank you darlin!

[alittlebitmaybe]

this is like my fifth attempt at a comment that wasn't just "salskdasodgdgoSG!!!!!!!!!" or some other representation of how i'm giggling like a maniac and i keep failing i just?? what do i say???

yoU WROTE NICK/LOUIS i'm still in giddy shock this is so wonderful you're so wonderful i'm going to go smother myself i love this pairing so much help

your characterisation is beautiful your louis is beautiful liam acting like a cOP AND HARRY NEVER ENDING HIS SET BECAUSE ADORATION AND like seriously i need help i can't evne words i'm going to tattoo it to my eyeballs

"yeah ok harold youre not invited" how perfect

sorry about the lack of punctuation or sanity

in conclusion: yes good

[dangerbears]

HAHAHAH omg ahhh thank you so much for this omg i'm so glad you liked it so much i'm giggling to myself thank you!!! <33

[miss_mady]

"I hope you realise I'm going to hold the fuck out of your hand."

GR E TA

[dangerbears]

"AHHHHHHHHHHH"

[miss_mady]

STOP MAKING FUN OF ME

[miss_mady]

OTHER THINGS I LOVED:

And, like, Louis wouldn't do well in jail.

"Always," with a small smile, just for Harry.

"No," Harry moans. "Nick's not soft like you are."

Louis says, blowing gently into Harry's face so he has to squeeze his eyes shut

Louis sometimes really regrets they never fell in love with each other, because the thought of ever living apart from Harry scares the fuck out of him. The thought of not having Harry read his every mood and his every affectation is genuinely terrifying.

"Louis Tomlinson, you are the most gorgeous piece of ass I've ever seen and the things I'd do to you are absolutely filthy." SAME.

"Harry's lovely!" Louis says, offended. "Everyone wants him. Why wouldn't you?"

Louis shakes his head. "In twenty years, if we're both single, maybe. But he's just... I don't know. I don't want to do that to him."

"Do what to him, exactly?" Nick asks.

Louis almost smiles. "Me."

Louis closes his eyes and curls into it, pretending for a moment it's something real.

[dangerbears]

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"

[miss_mady]