many moons have come and gone (hs/lt)

Oct 11, 2012 09:47

title: many moons have come and gone
pairing: harry styles/louis tomlinson
disclaimer: hilariously untrue.
word count: ~8,500
summary: they can never seem to communicate when it matters. but it's all love, anyway. SEQUEL TO blackjacks running down my back.
notes: um, so from what i've gathered, 'blackjacks' was kind of a hit with y'all, so i ( Read more... )

why is this my life

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rainbowchelita October 11 2012, 17:45:08 UTC
OMG this was amazing
you got me worried for a little bit when Greg came in like i didn't know where my allegiances will lay but it turned out great!!!
Thank you for not making me choose xD

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influira October 11 2012, 18:25:46 UTC
i'll comment later but this is so good byeee xxxx

i fear i might quote the whole thing!!!!!!

wait i might do this now bc i legit have no time later lol

i'm gonna get ready and then do it wait

wow ok i have to leave in like 15 minutes and i'm nOT READY jesus ok let me do this fast??????????

Louis brings their hands up to his mouth, kissing Harry's knuckles. "This weekend?" he asks.
Harry opens his mouth, and his expression causes Louis' stomach to drop.
stabbing u

i hate you xxxxxxx
Louis smiles to himself, typing back, love you miss you ): xx
=(

"Harry, I barely see you. You're always out studying or at class or who the fuck knows what and I never see you and right now you're here and I miss you and I want you, okay? So can you fuck me or get me off or something?" Louis snaps.
FUCKING HELL

He trails his fingers down lightly to play at the waistband of Louis' pants. "We could...?" Harry offers ( ... )

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influira October 11 2012, 18:27:23 UTC
this comment was a lot better in my head hahaha....

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seemslikeaporno October 11 2012, 19:01:31 UTC
lbr i love most of your fic but this one is particularly good (but then again i particularly liked "blackjacks" so i guess this isn't all that surprising?).

anyways i love your louis and harry and i cackled like a fool through half of this and was really upset the other half i don't know you make me experience ~emotions~ so like good job. (i also think this is probably the first time i commented on your work and this is a terrible first impression but hmm yeah you're really cool and your writing is a+ and yes good work.)

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insanitygenius October 11 2012, 19:08:31 UTC
"Whatever," Louis says. "It's whatever. Who knows what will happen next year? Maybe we won't even be together. This whole conversation is stupid. I have homework."

But Greg's not looking at him anymore, because Greg's looking up and to the right of Louis' shoulder, face carefully blank and eyes very, very startled.

Louis closes his eyes.

"Oh," Harry says from behind him. "Okay."

;_______; whyyyyyyy

This was so lovely, though. 'blackjacks running down my back' of all of your pieces (I just have a thing for high school/university AUs in general, plus angst=favorite thing), and this is definitely not a disappointment. I love that it's still not all easy for them because their inability to communicate about things that matter wouldn't just disappear after they got together.

ALSO GREG JAMES. And Liam sending in the agony aunt email. <3 I love that the other boys were still involved even though they were less present.

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teapirate October 11 2012, 19:18:54 UTC
I CAN'T BELIEVE THERE'S ACTUALLY A SEQUEL omg i am never this lucky this is great okay here i go comment time ( ... )

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