many moons have come and gone (hs/lt)

Oct 11, 2012 09:47

title: many moons have come and gone
pairing: harry styles/louis tomlinson
disclaimer: hilariously untrue.
word count: ~8,500
summary: they can never seem to communicate when it matters. but it's all love, anyway. SEQUEL TO blackjacks running down my back.
notes: um, so from what i've gathered, 'blackjacks' was kind of a hit with y'all, so i ( Read more... )

why is this my life

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babygotbass October 12 2012, 05:17:51 UTC
Love, love, love this verse <3

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morethanever October 12 2012, 07:40:30 UTC
oh my gosh this hurts so good. i have no original coherent thoughts rn because i am still crying, but: i love your louis and harry, like they just act exactly how i see them in my head with their stupid codependency and stupid banter and just UGH, and your louis gives me so many feels besides him already being my favorite and i just CAN'T. but this is so realistic and even though we ended with sex i cried and it was a mess, but this was fantastic. your writing is fantastic and they/you are perfect. thanks for giving it to us!

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galaxy_soup October 12 2012, 08:11:30 UTC
Oh man, I loved Blackjacks and I love this as well. This is kind of weird to articulate, but I think what I like best about your fics is that they're very hopeful? Like, there's plot and there's downpoints, but instead of ruminating on a character's pain for a paragraph you let their feelings show through their words and their actions so that no mater what happens the reader isn't drowning their misery or whatever. It's very light and very real.

I love that every time Louis gets woken up by Harry, he's all sleepy and thinks he's some animal from his dreams. I love the addition of Greg James. I love that there's multiple issues going on (busy harry and louis won't talk and then louis does say something and harry overhears it mistake time). I just love it all.

also, uhm, bottom!Louis, yes please

Really good ♥

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naughticals October 12 2012, 09:06:58 UTC
fuck you fuck you fuck you urgh this is gross get it away from me before i break down
seriously, you don't know how much i was in love with the characterisation in blackjacks, and to see even more of it is just, urgh, perfect and i must have dropped my words somewhere because i can't even formulate coherent thoughts about this

i hate you and this verse and the fact that i'm still going to read it nightly eurgh

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badjujuboo October 12 2012, 09:29:55 UTC
OH YOU AND YOUR WORDS! HOW DO YOU MAKE THINGS SO AMAZINGLY FEELY THAT I JUST WANT TO ROLL AROUND IN THEM FOREVER AND EVER!?

the quiet sounds of another life, just out of reach.

THAT'S JUST.. IT'S PERFECT AND. WOW. LOVED THIS EVEN MORE MAYBE THAN THE FIRST LOOK INTO THIS LOUIS AND HARRY'S LIFE!

ps the songs.. as always.. fantasmic!

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