many moons have come and gone (hs/lt)

Oct 11, 2012 09:47

title: many moons have come and gone
pairing: harry styles/louis tomlinson
disclaimer: hilariously untrue.
word count: ~8,500
summary: they can never seem to communicate when it matters. but it's all love, anyway. SEQUEL TO blackjacks running down my back.
notes: um, so from what i've gathered, 'blackjacks' was kind of a hit with y'all, so i ( Read more... )

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ellisaco October 13 2012, 03:36:53 UTC
ugh do you know how excited I was when I saw that you wrote a sequel to blackjacks? i can't. this was soooo good. I love the characterization, and how they were best friends first, and how it took them forever to admit their feelings, and I love how often they say I love you. And it's just the perfect combination of fluff and angst. and omg please never stop writing larry fics.

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drivetothestars October 13 2012, 07:07:24 UTC
help oh my god are you perfect (((yes)))

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whyandwherefore October 13 2012, 13:55:03 UTC
I am planning our wedding. I hope that doesn't freak you out. It's going to be a beautiful ceremony, and we're going to quote your fics as our vows. ...my love for you is mildly creepy.

But honestly, this was lovely and beautiful and everything I wanted. Could you please give up all other commitments in your life and spend every second of every day writing your insanely, unfairly brilliant fics? I would be more than happy to spend every second of every day reading them.

"I'm not good at this sort of thing. Well, I'm not good at talking about this sort of thing, I mean. I'm good at feeling it, because, like, Harry, I've felt it for you for years. I've got practice."

"Forever, you know? Like. In that I really don't ever want to, like, not be with you? I guess? If that's okay with you?"

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torisaurusrex October 13 2012, 15:36:16 UTC
first off i'm annoyed with myself cause i kept putting off reading this and i always like reading ur shite right away. ANYWAY.
ugh i swear your lou is actually the most perfect human being.
It hurts more, because Louis hears the front door close quietly after midnight every night, and then he hears Harry's bedroom door close just as quietly a few minutes later. Louis pulls his comforter over his head and tries not to think about how long it's been since he's slept in his own bed, in his own room. He tries not to think about how long it's been since he's slept alone. This is just painful why greta WHY
also the relationship between haz and lou is actually perfect and has all the ups and downs of an actual relationship including misunderstandings (aka story of my LIFE) and feeling ignored like lou does in the beginning (actually me ALL THE TIME) and the constant worrying and questioning of the future by them and then by others.

you're perfect, your writing is perfect.

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flimsy October 13 2012, 17:14:07 UTC
I re-read Blackjacks yesterday, and just finished this, and my heart is in pieces. I love the way these two show their emotions through songs and playlists because they're both stupid idiots sometimes and can't communicate in any other way. Louis friendship with Zayn is just gorgeous and so sweet because yes, Zayn would so call him out on his bullshit and Louis would be mad at him but end up listening to him anyway. This was such a lovely lovely read, with all the details you've added (Greg! Liam!) and I'm a bit incoherent from all the happy feelings now.

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