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captain's privilege (hs/lt)

Oct 23, 2012 13:30

title: captain's privilege
pairing: harry styles/louis tomlinson
disclaimer: hilariously untrue.
word count: 2,200 words
summary: it's a steak and blowjob kind of night. (post-match head, essentially.)
notes: this is short and stupid, but hahaha. wish i was harry.

( captain's privilege )

why is this my life

Comments 94

colazitron October 23 2012, 21:34:37 UTC

*flails around* PERFECTION.

dangerbears October 23 2012, 21:58:32 UTC

<3333333333

venti_turtl October 23 2012, 21:39:38 UTC

Welp.
Bless you for writing this. My first though when I saw Louis in the Captain armband was "where's the fic? I need it nowwwwwww."
JFC, I love the way you write Louis. It never fails to make me heartichokey. And his thoughts before Harry came in...just... UGH. I have all the feels. Your Louis love is my Louis love.
Please never stop :D

dangerbears October 23 2012, 21:58:55 UTC

omfg that was my first thought too!!! and ahhguhgh i'm so glad you liked louis here ahaha. thank you so much babe

imagination55 October 23 2012, 21:45:11 UTC

So many kudos to you for this because blowjobs aren't the easiest to make exciting, I think, but wow. Harry submitting to anything and praising Louis and giving him his own special congratulations. Ugh its so hot and yet I'm overwhelmed by feels too as that's apparently how I roll where Louis is concerned these days. Here's hoping this fic is the first of many with these themes! Lovely stuff, chicka. :)

dangerbears October 23 2012, 21:59:42 UTC

LMAO I WAS TALKING TO NIKA WHILST WRITING THIS AND WE WERE BASICALLY LIKE "HOW DOES DANI DO IT" AHAHAHAH i hate porn omg i hope i never have to write it again ahahahaha. YOU SHOULD JUST DO IT FOR US ALL.
anyway
omg
thank you i'm so glad you liked this auhg!

imagination55 October 23 2012, 22:20:14 UTC

OH SHUSH YOUR FACE, YOU TWO. Fun fact: I find blowjobs really difficult to write, they're what I'm least confident about so that's why I love this because it's everything that should happen in one. Yay. \O/

PS. Porn is addictive. YOU WILL NEVER BE THE SAME AGAIN MWAHAHAHA (I hope, don't sell yourself too short, it was muchos hot!)

anonymous October 23 2012, 21:58:12 UTC

YES YES OMG I LOVE YOU TAKE IT TO HEART I'M A WRITER AS I'M SURE YOU CAN TELL FROM THIS STELLAR COMMENT THAT PROBABLY SOUNDS COCKY I'M NOT THOUGH BESIDES MAYBE JUST A LITTLE BUT THIS IS WORSHIP OF YOU NOT SELF-DIRECTED FLATTERY WORSHIP WORSHIP

dangerbears October 23 2012, 22:01:22 UTC

omg i can't tell if youre making fun of me or not hahahahah but thank you i hope??????

tangledincurls October 23 2012, 22:09:53 UTC

YES!!! Finally someone wrote about Footballer!Louis (WHY ISN'T EVERYONE WRITING FOOTBALL STORIES AFTER YESTERDAY?!!) and it was youuuuu ( ... )

dangerbears October 23 2012, 23:38:28 UTC

THE NEXT LONGFIC I WRITE IS GONNA BE FOOTBALLER AU SO GET READY HAHAHA. don't ever apologise for caps omg. and i'M NOT OVER IT EITHER OMFG I AM STILL NOT OKAY AND THE FULL DEFINITION OF NOT OKAY omg just shoot me.

ahhh but thank you so much i'm so so glad you enjoyed it!!! and ahaha how could louis tomlinson not ever banter hahahahah oh man. aughgh thank you again this was a lovely comment!!! xxx

tangledincurls October 24 2012, 08:23:07 UTC

OMG OMG SO EXCITED FOR THAT FOOTBALLER AU!!! I'm gonna pee my pants when you upload lol !!! xD
Two days after and i'm still in a Footballer!Louis induced haze. i still can't look at the pictures without getting emotional (more than allready), grinning like and idiot and getting teary eyed at the same time...he's just...and...sooo...and...L O U I S!!!

ps: not gonna shoot ya cause i need you to write that footballer au lol (aren't i selfless?)
pps: you know...after seeing him play football i REALLY need want Louis to get a little stickfigure footballer tatt, CAN YOU IMAGINE?!! x______x