title: drawing circles in water.
pairing: harry styles/louis tomlinson
disclaimer: hilariously untrue.
word count: ~9,200 words.
summary: AU. it's high school; everything's the end of the goddamn world.
notes: i decided i wanted to write a high school au and this apparently came out and it's so standard me, like, oh, cool, louis has an existential
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anyways i'm shit at commenting on things with any sort of finesse or whatever but i really enjoyed this a lot because, like, i dunno, it was really reminiscent of my dumb issues in high school, in a way? just being really into someone and you know thinking you're gonna marry them and all that? i dunno, i just saw a lot of myself in this fic, so i wanted to thank you for writing this, because it's lovely and silly and, like, endearing and desperate and it's really easy to relate to. yeah! so! awesome job!
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Pure wonderfulness right here.
Can I just live inside your brain?
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but really tho, don't ever deviate (i mean you can if you want to)! this formula, if you want to call it that, works really well for you; it never feels like 'ugh greta's at it again', it's always different and honest and resonates very well. and, really, who DOESN'T love louis!angst? come on.
specifically, though, i really loved the part with louis and jay and the 'don't make me say' (i may have choked up a bit but you'll never prove it). i love your brand of angst because it's always just the right amount - i never feel like i'm drowning in it, which is something i don't enjoy in fic.
anyway tl;dr i love you and your writing and please never stop ever.
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