Comments | dangercw: Fic: She'll Take Your Heart.

dangercw

Fic: She'll Take Your Heart.

Sep 16, 2010 19:35

Title: She'll Take Your Heart.
Author: dangercw
Pairing,Character(s): Rachel/Puck, Rachel/Finn
Rating: PG
Word Count: 700
Spoilers: None.
Summary: "She can hold your heart with every move she makes."
Author's Notes: Very, very special thanks go to mooosicaldreamz for being my beta in my time of need.

( Just the same, love of any other kind would simply be a waste of time. )

rachel/finn, puck/rachel, !fic

Comments 5

jewelksteele September 17 2010, 03:21:29 UTC

Oh God, I love this. :)
I'm a Finnchel shipper, but this was way to cute.

viudanegra September 17 2010, 04:12:05 UTC

I literally cried! Why did you do that?! =(

lj515 September 17 2010, 15:23:20 UTC

That was beautiful and all, but I really kinda hate you for making me so damn sad. Not cool, like, at all.

lizardinlove September 18 2010, 17:22:27 UTC

That was phenomenal. Really. I definitely didn't see that coming at the end though. But it was really great. Good job :)

berry_blair September 27 2010, 17:35:43 UTC

I hate you! at first i was prepared that puck was just a guest and he wasn't going to marry rachel, then he talked about being in sickeningly in love with her and seeing her naked which raised my hopes up that this will end with puck and rachel and then you end it like that! waaahh!!!

but it is really good, you managed to bring out strong emotions
i don't think it will affect me as strongly if rachel ended up with puck, :)