One Shot - JaeMin - Those words

[deftonsita]

Those words
Thanks to: yummyfruit 
"And now the only thing that you can do is keep up
with that movement that takes you to the ecstasy,
with his hands on your hips and his lips in your neck,
whispering sweet words and kissing you look up to the cream ceiling of the room.
"Cream color; just like your skin..."

Comments

[kurogoma]

that was really heartbreaking....
min cheating, yet doesn't love jae...
i wish he will one day, but you know it is wrong to wish for it this way....
poor yoochun.

sigh....

[deftonsita]

*tries to patch her heart* D:!!!
Thanks for your comment :3
i hope u had like it

[foolishlovexo]

That was...wow.

I've lost all my words.

And for some reason I keep thinking, Poor Yoochun.

Beautifully written <3

Thanks for sharing!

[deftonsita]

i actually think "poor Jae" D:! one sided love is not good ;_;

Thanks to you for reading and for your comment :3

[realitywaiting]

T-T that was....wow...the feeling is quite potent, wonderfully written, It's really sad though that he's attracted Jeajoong but loves Yoochun...and now i'm kind of out of it because Heath Ledger is dead...I quite liked him as an actor...hmmm

[theresa_lynne]

WHAT? HE'S DEAD? :O

[realitywaiting]

Sadly yes, it's all over the news, i only found out about it when i signed on to my msn this evening

[deftonsita]

Thanks! for reading and for your comment :3
i liked him too as an actor and i srsly never saw this comming, not from him D:!

[theresa_lynne]

So sad. This was a horrible situation. Changmin didn't have enough practice saying no in the past. D:
This wasn't translated badly at all. At least, I don't think it is because I still got the emotion from it. Or maybe that's the work of your beta. LOL If so, good job to said beta. *claps hands while listening to DBSK CLAP! too XD*

[deftonsita]

uh i think that when i wrote this i was thinking in Changmin looking for some consolation in JaeJoong because he and Yoochun broke up, in spanish this is actually the first part of three

Or maybe that's the work of your beta.
WAHAHAH, YOU'LL NEVER KNOW!, if i say yes u may want to steal my betta D:! *climbs ehr betta*

*claps hands while listening to DBSK CLAP! too XD*
*facepalm* LOL

[theresa_lynne]

Ahh. That makes sense, too. Still so sad.

Whatever. I don't use a beta. XDDD :P

[mrsedjack]

...MIN is CHEATING? O_________O

When was the last time I read a fic where Min cheated on someone? *thinks hard* I don't think I have, not in that way. Or perhaps I've forgotten.

I haven't read the Spanish version (I can't; I took French. xD), but this is not badly translated at all - I can still feel it all. D: Kinda hurts...

I love the last part with 'love you'. ♥

[deftonsita]

haha, thanks!! i'm glad that u liked it, thanks for reading and for your comment :3

well, the spanish version is just a slighgt (?) different that this one and in spanish this is only the first part of three