OneShot - JaeMin - LOVE

Feb 04, 2008 17:31

LOVE
Thanks to: paranoiam 
A/N:This is for jaemint because she found Yoochun in "This is how love at first sight happens!"
"Everything is diferent from where you come,
a place where the forest is actually a desert
and the desert is the forest,
where a kiss is a hug and a hug is a kiss...
and you like to hug Changmin, a lot"

December 32nd )

!language: english, paring: jaejoong/changmin, +section: requests, *fandom: dbsk

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cynsinnn February 5 2008, 14:07:19 UTC
I love it xD It's cute, and I love the alien-world references and all. I'll look forward to reading the December one

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deftonsita February 6 2008, 21:33:24 UTC
Thanks for reading!! :D
i just hope i don't forget to post it XD

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kanintallrik February 6 2008, 22:23:11 UTC
wow. it's so short and I love the way you write. (it's really hard to describe tho)
it's weird and I love how you're not telling a story, but fragments of a story. take a little of this and the most important of that. (I really liked that about making a bracelet. I can imagine sitting next to a person like that, watching his hands as he's making a bracelet. it must be great.)
and the place where everything is different (and he smiled you a hug? I wanna steal that :O)
and the begginning, all totally random. some weird sci-fi spice that had nothing to do with the real thing, in reality.
I wanna write like this. and sometimes I do, but it's hard dammit, isn't it? :O

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deftonsita February 7 2008, 02:58:40 UTC
Thank you, for reading and for your comment, i'm glad u like it :3
the bracelet was pretty xD, a friend of mine made me one with those colors, and somehow i wanted to add something like that in the story, actually, sometimes i don't even think about the things that i write, i just find my self doing them ... so, yeah is hard to describe.
u write too? :D!!! well, i like to write vague fics... mostly because i like to go to the point of action ahahah!! and because my english is not so good XD
once again, thank you :D

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chloe1910 February 9 2008, 08:17:07 UTC
<3333

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deftonsita February 9 2008, 22:40:48 UTC
~♥

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jaemint February 9 2008, 10:25:59 UTC
HOMFG, I can't believe I almost missed this! But yay! You remembered! When I was about to give up thinking that you've totally forgotten all about this difficult prompt, you came up with this for me~ ILU. *dances*

Sitting by his side while he was making a bracelet, the threads of different colors in his hands, red, yellow and blue in his left hand and green and pink in his right you started explaining how you felt every time that you see certain person, of how your chest would beat faster, how difficult it was to breath and even think correctly, of how the only thing you wanted to do was to hug that person... kiss that person.

Am totally loving the gentle, soft, romantic imagery that you're creating with this in my mind. Oh, JaeMin. ♥

Thank you again for this wonderful fic! :D

Btw, sorry for the late comment. Life without internet shucks. :P

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deftonsita February 9 2008, 23:18:54 UTC
ahaha of course i remembered darling, :3, i'm lazy, that's all, but better be late than never, rite? :3. and i actually made two fics with the same promp XD, this one and another... :D, it was a good propm
I'm glad u like it!! :D!
and yeah D:! life without internet definetly sucks, i know what it feels like, so don't worry XD

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kratynoi February 10 2008, 06:14:47 UTC
Awww! I love your writing. Your words just flow so beautifully.
a place where the forest is actually a desert and the desert is the forest, where a kiss is a hug and a hug is a kiss
Lovely fluffies all over. ^^ That just made my day....or week (midterms ~.~ oi).

"It's called Love, you fool."

Well, you thought, some things never change. ♥

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