Comments | dani_the_girl: With the birds I'll share this lonely view

dani_the_girl

With the birds I'll share this lonely view

Jul 02, 2008 22:03

Title: With the birds I'll share this lonely view
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating/warnings: 18. I can never keep the American ratings straight (which is worse - NC-17 or R?) so I'm going with English ones. Boysex. Spoilers for Adrift.
Summary: Jack takes Ianto to see Flat Holm
Notes: So. This goes after Greeks Bearing Gifts and continues on from ( Read more... )

fic, torchwood

Comments 18

ahlai July 2 2008, 22:08:16 UTC

Oh gosh! I completely forgot about this, I'm so sorry. *grovels*

It's absolutlely wonderful though, I love it to bits.

dani_the_girl July 2 2008, 22:15:23 UTC

Hey, that's fine - I sent it to you and then went away for a week! And actually, coming back after literally having no internets or computer access at all for a week made me see that I was happy enough to go ahead with it.

Still, I'm really glad you liked it! I found the explict stuff really hard to write - did that bit work for you?

ahlai July 3 2008, 08:03:29 UTC

Yeah, sometimes you just need to step back from something for a bit.

It was really good, just right in fact, well done!

dani_the_girl July 3 2008, 08:11:49 UTC

Thanks.

kickair8p July 3 2008, 03:05:40 UTC

Oh, liked this! Not just the sex scene (good as it was), but Ianto's quite reasonable trepidation and Jack's cluelessness.

Quick kibitz re Lauren -- why not offer her cryo-space till 2029? Worked for Tommy, for Jack...

~

dani_the_girl July 3 2008, 08:02:06 UTC

I assume they've only got limited space in the cryo though - Tommy and Jack were both necessities. Also, then Jack would have to fess up about Flat Holm to the others in the Hub since they'd probably notice next time they went to unfreeze Tommy.

laurab1 July 3 2008, 11:04:02 UTC

US ratings make less sense than ours, so don't worry.

NC-17 means "no children under 17 allowed to see this film", so yes, equivalent to 18.

R means "children under 17 allowed to see this film, provided they are accompanied by an adult"; roughly equivalent to your parents taking you to a 15.

dani_the_girl July 3 2008, 12:33:41 UTC

Ah, I see! OK, that kind of makes sense. Thanks.

lefaym July 3 2008, 11:16:37 UTC

Nicely done; I could see it happening like this.

dani_the_girl July 3 2008, 12:34:26 UTC

Thanks. I figure Ianto can't possibly know about Flat Holm before Cyberwoman so I thought this would be an interesting point for him to find out.

adafrog July 3 2008, 13:00:35 UTC

Great story, thanks.

dani_the_girl July 3 2008, 13:21:51 UTC

You're welcome :)