Disillusions and Confusion, Part 3/3

[daniomalley22]

Part Two

Comments

[slf630]

Great job! I love a good ghost story and this one was very creepy! That ending, man. Totally gave me chills. Thanks for sharing. :)

[daniomalley22]

Thanks! This was my first attempt at writing horror, it's good to hear the creepiness came across :)

[roxymissrose]

That was really, really, fucking scary--I'm not kidding one little bit. Now I feel all unsettled and freaked out...holy shit, you really did a wonderful job on this. I hardly ever get scared by ghost stories anymore but you managed to scare the crap out of me!

[daniomalley22]

Aw, thanks :D \o? While writing this I seriously did not expect to successfully scare anyone, so that's really cool to hear :)

[soncnica]

Woohoo, finally an awesome creepy horror story! It is soooooo hard to find those, and I just wanna give you a hug for writing one. :-) and this really was scary and creepy. And I love, just love the fact that the ending wasn't all neat and tidy with the ghost gone and everyone lived happily ever after. But that the boys had to move and the ghost was still in the house and darn, but that ghost was scarier than most are on SPN! Lol :-)
I seriously enjoyed reading this, it made me go YAY an awesome ghost story and then it made me go oooh now that is just creepy! Which I love!
Tnx for writing and tnx for sharing!
S.

[daniomalley22]

Thank you so much! This comment made my day :)

[tipsy_kitty]

Such a well-done ghost story...the creepy feeling of not-right in the beginning, the tragic backstory, and then the horrifying house in the control of the ghost, eeeee! Gave me chills when I read it!!

[daniomalley22]

Thank you! This was such a different type of fic for me, I was so relieved that it came together ok :D

[laurathelurker]

Great story. All the little details of the building creepy things that Jared experienced were perfect. And that ending whoa, creeped me right out. And while I feel bad for the poor girl she really needs to be salted and burned.

[daniomalley22]

Thanks :) Yeah, the J's could really have used some help from Sam and Dean here.