Vigil

[danlef]

Many thanks to asahifirsa and order_of_angels for picking up my mistakes for me

Comments

[swissmarg]

You totally got me! I was just so sad and devastated, I mean this way it's also sad too but at least he's not dead. That letter John left was fantastic. I really like the structure of this too, counting down.

[danlef]

Thank you. You know, for some time John was in real danger to die at the end; luckily my insightful friend and beta Sam has talked me out of it.

[danlef]

Oh, this comment brought me such pleasure to read! Thank you.

Yes, my third is now seven weeks old and I got two girls too, 22 months and 4 years. I must say that I admire you for writing such complex and long piece as Corpus Hominis is; I barely manage to trod on with You should have let him sleep. I know a lot about typing one-handedly:))

[trista_zevkia]

Fantastically done!

[danlef]

Thank you!

[sunny_rainfall]

wow omg I totally though t john was dead

[danlef]

Good, that was my intention:)

[exbex]

I did not see that coming, and I was so ready to accept the tragedy. Either way I feel like John got to him. But I'm very happy that he didn't die, if for no other reason than that it's so cleverly written.

[danlef]

You people mke me feel so smug:)