Comments | danlef: You should have let him sleep (chapter 13 of 15)

danlef

You should have let him sleep (chapter 13 of 15)

Jul 02, 2013 09:04

What have you done?

Khan didn’t say it aloud but the dismay written all over his features spoke clearly enough. He sagged on the floor ungraciously, covering his face. John stood up, dusting his clothes, and came over to kneel before the horror-stricken man. He wasn’t afraid of him anymore. For the split-second when their eyes met - John’s ( Read more... )

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saschia July 2 2013, 21:59:55 UTC

aaarrgh!

Never trust Khan!

Looking forward to the TBC part, as John being the survivor again is just SO unfair!

danlef July 3 2013, 11:18:34 UTC

Well, no matter how hard I try, I can never bring myself to murder John. So, I've killed Khan instead:)

fansquee July 3 2013, 16:21:41 UTC

Dear god, you didn't just put me all through that to have him die again did you??!!

Brilliant chapter.

danlef July 3 2013, 17:51:50 UTC

I did:)

But there is one more chapter to go before the Epilogue, I hope that will satisfy you:)

fansquee July 3 2013, 20:07:22 UTC

But.... Noooooo, I wanted them both alive. I don't like unhappy endings. *lbottom lip trembles*

danlef July 4 2013, 05:00:00 UTC

I said, one more chap to go! Death is nothing permanent when it comes to Star Trek.

saschia July 3 2013, 21:00:52 UTC

I had this kind of super-romantic image of them being redistributed elementary particle by elementary particle, being forever part of the new life on the new planet...

It's kinda what I want for myself after death - to be shot into the Sun. Being the first human on my way to the stars - first as photons and than as the stellar wind...