You should have let him sleep (chapter 14 of 15)

[danlef]

Chapter 14 - The Rise

This is the end, my friends. The last chapter I reserve for the amazing cover my unbeatable beta rranne made for me - we only have to sort out the details. Thanks to you all who stayed with me through this!
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Comments

[fansquee]

Oh, that was brilliant... Fantastic ending, sorry I doubted how it would be.

[danlef]

Don't be sorry, to make you doubt it was part of the plan:)

I'm glad you stayed:)

[saschia]

You wrote a hapoy-end! Brilliant!

And, like every well-written story, yours leave me wanting more...

Great work!

Thanks!

[danlef]

I think that half of the fandom would hate me for leaving him dead, so...:)

Re: Thanks!

[saschia]

I can live with Sherlock being dead, I just can't live with John being heart-broken again. I just can't forget the his face at the grave...

[ophite68]

Lovely!

[arianedevere]

Oh good grief, Danlef. That. Was. Amazing. I’m so sorry it’s taken me this long to get round to reading the whole story. I was really excited by the first couple of chapters but then Real Life got in the way and I decided to put it aside so that I could concentrate properly when I finally did get to read it. Eventually I loaded it to my Kindle and read it in squinty-vision on my phone during several consecutive train journeys home from work.

It completely blew me away. I know there have been other Sherlock-is-Khan or vice versa stories but none of their summaries have inspired me to read them so I don’t know how they went; but this one was completely amazing. The detail, and the obvious amount of research you’ve done into both Sherlock and Star Trek, make it true to both ’verses. Not being a true classic Trek fan (I’m a Next Gen girl) I can’t comment so much on that but I have seen Wrath of Khan several times and loved how you incorporated very canonical bits of it into your story.

Similarly, the Sherlock references

[danlef]

Oh, my. I'm glad you liked it. And don't be sorry for being later than some; better late than never they say, right? You're always welcome here; you're my LJ foster mother after all (I know you wouldn't own me, but I'll have all you the same:))

[arianedevere]

I will adopt you any time you want. Just don't bring the babies - I don't have a maternal bone in my body. ;-)

[danlef]

Don't worry, they don't come with the bargain. They're a handful each, something between blessing and a disaster to humanity:)

[kirinin]

very cool! Thank you for this. ;)

-K