A random lunch post.

[dante_fox]

Well I am having a decent day at work today, not a hole lot really going on. So ya you can say that things are going kind of slow. But the main reason for this post is. I would like to ask everyone who is reading my story for some feedback before I go much further. I'm just trying to get an idea of what kind of demand I honestly have. so please

Comments

[moontrail]

I could do without all the foul language in it.

[moontrail]

But on a positive note, the story's quite imaginative.

[romani123]

We talked about it last night.