Fallen Leaves, Chapter 7 - Original Ending

Sep 05, 2011 11:31


-Fallen Leaves-
-Chapter 7 (Original Ending)-Author: DaraDaraDara12
Pairing: JaeMin
Genre: Horror, Romance, AU
Length: Chaptered
Rating: P-13
Warnings: Character death, gore, violence

Summary:
A disease has spread worldwide and the world plunges into darkness. Changmin struggles for his life, constantly running around to stay alive. Can Jaejoong save him ( Read more... )

title: fallen leaves, pairing: jeamin, genre: horror, lenght: chaptered

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whatifgirl86 September 5 2011, 21:19:52 UTC
Aww it finished already. Actually I liked this ending since it is logical that they would have to have died. I'm glad that they did it together.

Really enjoyed the whole story:D

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daradaradara12 September 5 2011, 21:50:01 UTC
I'm glad that you liked my ''downer'' ending. I'm a sucker for those, I don't know why. I'm trying to write a somewhat happier ending, but I'm having a hard time with it. At least, the whole story is finished, so there is not stress!
Thank you for reading and commenting all along!

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crimson_miharu September 5 2011, 23:00:24 UTC
D=> Ya know somehow I knew it would end like this after I read the last chapter. I honestly didn't see a way for them to get out of this alive and once Yunho entered their room I knew the other's were dead...it's so sad cause a samll part of me wanted them to make it. Hopefully the alternate ending will cheer me up a bit! Awesome story and honestly I'm sad to see it end =(

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daradaradara12 September 6 2011, 17:35:17 UTC
It's always over too fast. When I posted the chapter, I kinda clicked: Hey! It's over!
I knew inside I would make them both die at the end. It was my goal to make a zombie horror, after all, so it fitted the genre.
Anyway, thanks for reading and leaving comments!

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jaceni September 11 2011, 09:21:35 UTC
T_T Even though it's sad, I think you should just stick with this ending. It goes with the story, is logical, and I don't see any other way to end this. So don't stress out about another ending dongsaeng. ^^ This could be your sad ending fic that you wanted. :) I liked it a lot. Enjoyed the corniness too. :D Had me going AAWEEE T_T when they were telling each other what they felt. It must've been awful to be the only two remaining after having known they weren't the only ones. And when Yunho did the palm thing he really tricked me. XD Depressing, but in a good way. ^___^ Can't wait for your next fic. I wonder what you'll tackle next... and by the way, you're getting better and better at writing your stories. And they also seem to be getting shorter. XD But at least you're finishing them. See you later. :D

P.S. So sorry for the delay in reading. Been busy, so barely had a chance to read it. :)

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daradaradara12 September 11 2011, 12:56:21 UTC
Thank you for your support, Unnie!

I'm also glad that Yunho could trick you! Damn zombies, they keep getting more intelligent, don't they! I really enjoyed writing this verse, it was nice, but I couldn't see it with a good ending. I was worried that you guys might want an happier one, but since veryone seems satisfied witht this one, I think it's gonna stay like that.

And also cuz while I was trying to write it, I had an idea about dragons and fairy-tales and... *cough* I started writing that instead of making my alternate ending... ._. I have to write it fast before my homework and classes take over my life (six hours of homework per class, what the f***?!)

Don't worry about any delay, dear. Some readers never comment at all! ^.-

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jaceni September 11 2011, 21:06:51 UTC
OMG. XD You're doing a dragon fic? I had a dragon fic planned too. XDDD But mine won't come out until waaaayyyyy in the future. Oooo, I know someone who wanted to read a dragon fic, so I'm sure she'll be happy with yours. :D And can't wait for that one. ^__^

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daradaradara12 September 11 2011, 23:14:28 UTC
It's already started!!! I LOVE dragons, so I guess it had be done! ^^

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