Redemption Chapter 4

[darcia_23]

Ok, this isnt beta'ed either...
there is a part in which hermione and draco talk about harry~ this is a very rocky part and comments/suggestions would be very much appriecated (i just dont think she would say what she said there and now i'm stuck... >_<)

Chapter 4

Draco kept to himself for the better part of the next day and no one dared to bother

Comments

[takhen]

Nice update. Thanks

[darcia_23]

Thanks for reading ^_^ (i know it needs work...XD)^_^

[takhen]

Its great thus far. I am excited to see where you are going with the story line and the characters. You should be proud of the work you have put in so far.