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THE LITTLE PRINCE

Sep 01, 2006 22:44

Title: The Little Prince
Written By: kjsilopanna
Timeline: Post 5.13
Rating: R (For language mostly…lame, I know, but I can’t write porn. Sorry.)
Summary: Justin has angst. Brian makes lame innuendos. Craziness ensues.
Author Notes: It helps to have a general knowledge of the original The Little Prince to appreciate this, but it’s not really necessary. Go ( Read more... )

Comments 79

suzvoy September 1 2006, 17:35:09 UTC

“I’m the boss.”

Justin doesn’t look up from the computer, but waves in Brian’s general direction. “Hi, Tony Danza. Nice to meet you.”

Bwa!

Really enjoyed this :)

kjsilopanna September 10 2006, 23:18:39 UTC

Thank you soooo much! I was hoping that line wasn't too dorky (mostly because I thought it was funny and I'm a massive dork), so I'm glad you liked.

PS: I totally loved The Things I Cannot Change. I haven't really commented before, but I only started reading it after you were already several chappies ahead of me in writing it. *is a bad suzvoy!fangirl*

suzvoy September 11 2006, 07:57:19 UTC

Thank you soooo much! I was hoping that line wasn't too dorky (mostly because I thought it was funny and I'm a massive dork), so I'm glad you liked.

Dude, I'm ALL about the dorkiness :D :D

PS: I totally loved The Things I Cannot Change. I haven't really commented before, but I only started reading it after you were already several chappies ahead of me in writing it. *is a bad suzvoy!fangirl*

Oh!! Thank you so much!

rosengirl September 1 2006, 23:04:41 UTC

Lovely ^_^

kjsilopanna September 10 2006, 23:19:03 UTC

Oooh, thank you!

sian265 September 2 2006, 01:22:52 UTC

“Listen, Sunshine. You’ve got to stop using these,” she says, pointing at his eyes with her index and middle fingers, “Because they won’t lead you to anything but trouble. Focus on things that will really make you happy, and your heart will show you what you need to do.” She pats Justin on the cheek and leaves to give a table its check.

Pearls of wisdom, Deb really cuts through the bull, enjoyed this!

kjsilopanna September 10 2006, 23:21:24 UTC

Hee! I'm glad you liked that part, I consider Debbie to be the fox of the story, "what is essential cannot be seen with the eyes", all that jazz. Each character had his or her role that loosely mimiced those of the characters in the book, so I'm happy you enjoyed!

sian265 September 11 2006, 02:23:06 UTC

I had a feeling that was her, but I had read to many stories lately that didn't treat her like the wise mother earth she can be. Nice job:-)

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kjsilopanna September 10 2006, 23:22:13 UTC

Hee! Thank you sooooo much.

seanmegansean September 2 2006, 20:51:41 UTC

Definitely one of my favorites so far. Love it :D

kjsilopanna September 10 2006, 23:22:35 UTC

*bops merrily* Thank you soooooo much!