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THE LOVE SONG OF BRIAN A. KINNEY

Sep 01, 2006 22:45

Title: The love song of Brian A. Kinney
Written By: superren
Timeline: Past, Present and Future
Rating: R
Summary: Dare to be who you want to be. Even if who you want to be is a narcissistic asshole with a pretty blonde boyfriend.
Author Notes: Inspiration for this was The love song of J. Alfred Prufrock by T.S. Eliot. There's a line that may sound ( Read more... )

Comments 64

suzvoy September 1 2006, 17:11:57 UTC

I'm not sure what I think about this. It's definitely well-written, but it feels more like a character statement than an actual fic. I'm not sure I'm even making any sense, LOL.

Thanks for the read :)

sherebis September 2 2006, 19:27:41 UTC

i agree with you... there was no climax....uh... so to speak... yet well written and intersting haracter analysis.

veryshortlist October 3 2006, 21:15:30 UTC

Hmm. I did have trouble with the ending, so maybe that's what you're picking up on.

Thanks for the compliments. :)

_kiden September 1 2006, 17:41:26 UTC

This was great! Simple and well written -
Excellent job.

veryshortlist October 3 2006, 21:15:47 UTC

Thanks!

beathen September 1 2006, 18:14:58 UTC

This was a beautifully quick, but revealing glance into Brian's life. Very nice.

veryshortlist October 3 2006, 21:15:58 UTC

Thanks!

anonymous September 1 2006, 23:49:04 UTC

What was the "lifted line".

anonymous September 4 2006, 03:57:55 UTC

That Brian doesn't believe in love stories is a given. He barely even believes in love.

sian265 September 2 2006, 01:04:47 UTC

You nailed his voice, and so refreshing not seeing a sappy BK! And that yes, being Brian Kinney true to form can still leave us saying Ah!

veryshortlist October 3 2006, 21:17:06 UTC

The sappy BK is interesting to me. He's not like that ever. Which is what I love about him. That and the fast that he never passes up a chance to make a dirty joke.