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A NIGHT AT THE LIBERTY BATHS

Sep 01, 2006 22:48

Title: A Night at the Liberty Baths
Written by: slave_o_spike
Timeline: Mid-season 2
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: There is the briefest moment of a threesome
Summary: A night at the Liberty Baths escalates into a riot and one police investigator has his hands full.
Author Notes: I don't really have to say this, but anything in italics is the recounting of the ( Read more... )

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A Night at Liberty Baths fansee September 2 2006, 03:31:26 UTC

You have a great way with dialogue. FanSee, wiping her eyes.

Re: A Night at Liberty Baths slave_o_spike September 11 2006, 01:05:41 UTC

I love doing dialogue the most - I wish I could do fics of nothing but (writing all that introspection makes my head hurt).

Thank you for the wonderful fb!

funny but oddly wrong firehead30 September 2 2006, 05:20:29 UTC

Ok, I liked the dialogue, I thought telling the story through Teddy and Emmett voices was funny and insightful...I just have problems with everyone being turned on by Justin babbling in parselmouth. I always love jealous!Brian...but still having problems with the whole Harry Potter reference....but Teddy and Keyser Soze reference from the usual suspects made me crack up.

Re: funny but oddly wrong slave_o_spike September 11 2006, 01:09:30 UTC

Well, hello! I knew I had probably stepped over some boundaries when writing this one even though my current WIP is a cannibal fic. I now know my boundaries. *does mime impression*

I always liked Danny doing the whole parselmouth thing in the second movie and I thought Justin doing it would be hot. I guess it's my kink though.

And yeah, I love Ted and Emmett (especially Ted) and I love writing stories about Brian and Justin from their point of view.

I'm not sure many people got the Keyser Soze reference though.

Thanks for responding truthfully!

Re: funny but oddly wrong firehead30 September 11 2006, 01:25:32 UTC

Maria ( ... )

Re: funny but oddly wrong slave_o_spike September 11 2006, 01:37:45 UTC

LOL! Oh God! Yes I do get it ( ... )

sonofabiscuit77 September 2 2006, 09:22:34 UTC

I think lilibet put it perfectly when she said weirdly great. Loved Ted's retelling.

slave_o_spike September 11 2006, 01:10:32 UTC

Weird but great. Nuff said.

Ted is my muse. I just love Ted.

Thanks you!

beauty_forashes September 2 2006, 10:48:21 UTC

BWAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!! Was laughing all through this fic, it's the good kind of weird. :D

slave_o_spike September 11 2006, 01:11:23 UTC

But it's still weird. LOL!

If you were laughing all the way through, then I've done my job! Thanks.

seamonkeyz27 September 2 2006, 12:55:59 UTC

LOL Oh my! I almost died when I read that the thing was parslemouth!!!!

slave_o_spike September 11 2006, 01:12:06 UTC

I think I may have gone too far with the parselmouth but it would make me go 'WTF?'

Thank you for the fb!